As Easy as You Make It - Non-JRock, Loveless, Soubi/Ritsuka

Dec 14, 2008 16:09

Title: As Easy as You Make It
Author: Kagome
Warnings: Mild suggestiveness (teenage hormones~), fluff.
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Soubi/Ritsuka
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: Sometimes, Ritsuka thinks love is complicated. But it doesn’t really have to be.
Comments: For gryfndr84, the Soubi to my Ritsuka. ^_^ Happy ( Read more... )

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sakky_ December 14 2008, 22:58:24 UTC
awwwww, that was adorable <3 the last bit was a tad too sweet for me tho, tbh. but that's me. i adore adore adore especially how soubi leaves ritsuka all achey and wanting for something and (mwee that image! 8D) and ritsuka taking care of soubi (soup in bed is just..awwwwwww. hehehe 8333)

and random typo...

"..she’s certainly not as blind to the workings of the heart as he once had been."

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_newworld December 15 2008, 02:03:54 UTC
Aww, thank you. ^_^ And hee~. I'm a total sap, so nothing's really too sweet for me, though I must warn that sometimes these two will rot your teeth out when I write them. XD

I can imagine Ritsuka being like that at that age--hormones and all, with not much of a clue as to what to do about them. *LOL*

Thanks for catching that typo too! It's been corrected. <333

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nimoe December 15 2008, 02:20:23 UTC
I like fics where I can read how Ritsuka and Soubi mature together. Like good wine, or something.

And honestly, I was all confused when he was going to wake Soubi. I couldn't figure out what he was waking Soubi up for. The confession was a good ending, I think.

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_newworld December 15 2008, 02:53:08 UTC
I like fics like that too. :D

I did that on purpose. *LOL* I wanted the reason to be unclear until there at the end, and that's how I wanted it to end--with the confession that Ritsuka had previously thought would be incredibly complicated for him to say.

Thank you for reading. ^_^

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nimoe December 15 2008, 03:34:55 UTC
Yes, great job!

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faricsyung December 15 2008, 02:31:19 UTC
definitely sits very well with me who loves fluff. xDD
besides, isn't it the holidays season? ^^

thanks for sharing this!

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_newworld December 15 2008, 02:55:01 UTC
I love fluff too, so I guess that's why I had such a good time writing it. XD Fluff is always good during the holidays too!

Thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed! <333

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_newworld December 15 2008, 02:56:09 UTC
Thank you! ^______^ I wanted it to be sweet, and to show their relationship at different angles.

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onnawufei December 15 2008, 02:51:49 UTC
This made me feel all warm and toasty inside. <3 ^^

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_newworld December 15 2008, 02:57:04 UTC
I'm glad it did. :) That means I was successful, as that was how I was hoping it would make readers feel. ^__^ Thank you for reading and commenting! <333

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