Right - Ruki/Aoi, Isshi/Aoi

Jan 21, 2008 12:08

Title: Right
Author: Kagome
Theme: Lyrics # 10. Lyrics are located at the beginning of the fic.
Warnings: Smut, unfaithful Aoi, confusing emotions, and sap.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ruki/Aoi (the GazettE), Isshi (Kagrra,)/Aoi (the GazettE)
Disclaimer: Standard disclaimer applies.
Summary: It’s wrong, what they’re doing. Aoi has a boyfriend, ( Read more... )

kagrra, aoixisshi, aoixruki, the gazette, 10 encounters, rukixaoi, isshixaoi

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kuroiyosei January 21 2008, 18:44:33 UTC
gnd\lfsavdfadmSAfgBASFJNSd

........ now if THAT wasn't a coherent comment I don't even know

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:08:14 UTC
*giggles* The incoherency is a good thing, though, right? ^_______^

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kuroiyosei January 21 2008, 19:25:18 UTC
sure it is XD

poor Isshi though <33

too bad you didn't reveal why he cancelled the meeting with Aoi >o

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:29:56 UTC
^__________^ Thank you!

I would have been happy to reveal why, but Isshi-muse is evil and secretive and refuses to tell me. ^^;; I'm sorry!

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i_kaede January 21 2008, 18:57:59 UTC
jlas;dlhfdks;'s;dlfjkh's;lfdkgfhjklfgj'fdl;gjkl *incoherent words*

totally loving it. <3

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:09:59 UTC
Yay, more incoherency! ^__________^

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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missykitty0115 January 21 2008, 19:11:25 UTC
:DDD <---Stupid grin. I'm smiling studpidly like Aoi now too, yay! :D XD

♥~~~ Awwwww, happy fluffy ending~ and rough hot sex! *dies*

...that's as much of a coherent comment as I can leave. Let's ignore the fact I had to type all that very slowly for it to make any sense. :D ♥

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:16:03 UTC
Awww, I'm so happy you like this! ^_______^ Cos I was a little nervous about it, because I didn't know if readers would find it... too rushed, or what. x_x;;; I tried to make it clear that Aoi was very confused to begin with, but later... he just sort of decides to go with it, because it feels right.

I kinda missed writing Ruki like this, too. Not just all RAWR!Dom but capable of feeling love and happiness and such. ^______^

Thank you very much. <3

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missykitty0115 January 21 2008, 19:52:34 UTC
Oh no, it wasn't too rushed at all! I thought it gave enough background info so it wouldn't just be Ruki going, "Hey Aoi, sex nao plz?" XD; Mhm, you conveyed Aoi's confusion too~. (:

Me thinks you should keep sortafluffy!Ruki muse around, he's not too rawr! or too cuddly, just the right mix. x3 ♥

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_newworld January 22 2008, 03:33:07 UTC
Yay! I'm glad. ^____^ It was going to be just smut, originally--just a quick rough-and-tumble somewhere, but the muses didn't cooperate. Which, I can't complain because I really like it better this way anyway.

Heh. He has his fluffy moments. And here I had been thinking that he was too RAWR!Dom and incapable of cute and fluffy and sweet anymore. XDXDXD

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wilhelmina111 January 21 2008, 19:19:17 UTC
*happysigh*
That's about all I can say/do right now.
<3
(Thank you for saving my boring evening! Shall have happy dreams now...)

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:31:40 UTC
Aww, I'm glad I could help. ^______^ <333

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Your icon. *____________* GUH.

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l33t_dreams January 21 2008, 19:23:11 UTC
ILYSM. <3
Everytime I get ready to type a comment, I just sigh happily and stare off into space. You dun fried my brain, girl.

But...just out of curiosity, why did Isshi cancel?

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_newworld January 21 2008, 19:35:31 UTC
ILY TOO. ^____________^ <33333333

Do you need a nurse? XD

I would be happy to tell you, but Isshi-muse isn't sharing the details, the secretive doofus. x_x *kicks him*

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