LJ Idol Week 23 - The Weak Force

[_messy]

Comments

[whipchick]

Great punchline! I love the image of Carter whipping around to see who giggled, too.

Small typos I spotted - "the bad guy no where in the vicinity" might be "nowhere"? And does Rogers get to finish "meant" or does he get cut off at "me"?

I really enjoyed this and it was a lot of fun - great energy!

[_messy]

Argh, thanks. It's been one of those mornings where my usual editor was unavailable so I had to submit it un-beta'd!

I'm actually surprised there aren't more errors lol

[jacq22]

Fun stuff, and punchline,....had some verve.

[jem0000000]

Aw, poor dude. Sounds like a rough day at work.

[cheshire23]

Sounds like the backup needs to come replace Carter. :)

[m_malcontent]

Cute, funny take on the prompt.