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gracerene December 15 2016, 15:39:20 UTC
Ooo, such a great conversation. And poor Harry is just beyond smitten!

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_melodic_ December 15 2016, 19:49:48 UTC
Aw thank you! Haha, yes he really is~

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enchanted_jae December 15 2016, 17:36:44 UTC
Huzzah!

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_melodic_ December 15 2016, 19:50:02 UTC
:D

<3

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sesheta_66 December 15 2016, 19:27:32 UTC
Awwwwww. ♥

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_melodic_ December 15 2016, 19:50:07 UTC
Hehe <333

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capitu December 15 2016, 20:21:20 UTC
Ohh! Oh! I love these dates-that-aren't-date-yet! :D

Harry's so, so smitten and he's adorable. I love all the pining. <3

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_melodic_ December 16 2016, 14:05:59 UTC
Aw thank you! I am glad you are enjoying all the excessive pining and don't want to throttle me yet! Hehe~

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felixfvlicis December 15 2016, 22:21:36 UTC
I'm screaming (on the inside, of course).
This conversation, short as it may be, was so ... loaded.
The dialogue was so concise but left little trails of hints at almosts, secrets whispered in the confines of the dark.
They're beginning to figure out what they want, where they should go, through each other, and it's beautiful.

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“Listen, I forgave you a long time ago. I think at some point, you just have to forgive yourself.”

“Maybe,” Malfoy says softly. His hand reaches out, soft and warm as his thumb brushes against Harry’s lower lip and chin. Harry’s breath catches in his throat and he clenches his hands into fists beneath the table. “Sorry.” Malfoy’s face turns bright red. “You had some crumbs on your face.”

Gosh, it's all so lovely and perfect. I can't.

Let's not forget ...

“I hope to see you soon…” Malfoy’s words trail off and he swallows nervously before continuing. “...Harry.”

My insides have melted. That tiny hint of vulnerability, gah.

Hermione's right -- Harry can be really thick sometimes.

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_melodic_ December 16 2016, 14:07:10 UTC
Ahhh you and your generous comments!! <33

I'm so pleased you liked this scene and their loaded but simple conversation. I imagine they are both trying to play it cool and keep their hearts protected, meanwhile all their feelings and desires are just surging and fighting to be released.

:D

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