His Sweet Boy (Charlie/Teddy; NC-17)

Sep 01, 2016 16:33

Title: His Sweet Boy
Author: _melodic_
Fandom (Pairing): Harry Potter (Charlie/Teddy)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~980
Summary: Charlie adores his sweet, beautiful boy.
Disclaimer: I don’t own these lovely boys, no profit being made!
Highlight for Warnings: * Daddy!kink, Praise!kink, Dirty Talk, Anal Sex, Facials, Hand Jobs, Coming Untouched, First Person ( Read more... )

contains: hand jobs, fiction, contains: anal fingering, contains: spanking, genre: smut, fests, era: post hogwarts, contains: anal sex, pairing: charlie/teddy, contains: facials, contains: dirty talk, contains: age difference, contains: daddy!kink, rating: nc-17

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writcraft September 1 2016, 22:01:26 UTC
SUCH a hot fic. Jeepers :D

Loved this, I really enjoyed the pairing and the sweetness and sexiness of the whole thing. Really good job.

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_melodic_ September 1 2016, 23:32:35 UTC
Eeee, thank you!!

I have quickly become smitten with this pairing, so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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maccadole September 1 2016, 22:27:22 UTC
UMMMM this is everything I love???

I'm not sure what to do with this, it's just too good. The world would've really missed something if you hadn't procrastinated by writing this.

And god, yeah, Shifty turned me onto this pairing too!

AAAHH but listen, I don't know whether to thank you for this or be upset with you for it. Ssssssso goooood... So hottttt!!

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_melodic_ September 1 2016, 23:33:19 UTC
Ahahaha, so happy to have upset you? I mean, please you? Haha, I'm not sure!!

As always I live for your kind words and I am indeed happy you liked this<33

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maccadole September 2 2016, 22:11:10 UTC
Oh, you should be. At least one of us can be happy then. ;p I'm mostly a half-melted human being on the floor right now so you know, I'm not sure I can still feel emotions. But if I can, I am definitely happy too.

I read it again. It's like the third time.

It's just so good! With the breathed daddy and the flushed shame that Charlie kisses away because he liked it, so there's no need for Teddy to be afraid or make excuses. And the mention of a facial, even if we don't get to see it, and then the damned praise. So much enthusiasm and eagerness and omggg the way we jumpy right into the next scene and Teddy being ready for him and- and just-- the endearing PRAISE, it's so good, and the desperation and the denial/delayyyy, oh god, and coming untouched. Teddy must have been so desperate by then, oh my god, it makes me wonder how long he/they had been going at it by the time we enter the scene. Ghhhhnnnn ( ... )

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_melodic_ September 3 2016, 14:22:53 UTC
Oh you!!! How did you know how I needed this? I actually saw the notification but puporsedly didn't read it yet because I *knew* I was going getting cut this week over at LDWS and, my usual emotional self, was going to be super sad about it. And of course I was, sigh.

But, I saved this comment because I knew it would balm my bruised ego and cheer me up. Thank you my dear friend! You are always far too kind to me and it brings me such joy to read your comments.

Hahaha I love to throw a bit of tenderness to some good old smut. And yes just a hint of spanking but I'm very glad you caught it.

Sigh, so happy you liked this. <3

p.s. Have you considered making a "what I like/dislike" list for your journal? Or do you just want to freshen me up on your likes/dislikes, kinks and squicks? And your favourite pairings? Haha someone's bday is coming up ;p

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omarandjohnny September 2 2016, 08:26:36 UTC
::fans self::

HOLY HELL, that was a hot read. Beautifully done!

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_melodic_ September 2 2016, 13:28:54 UTC
Aw thank you!! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :D

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capitu September 2 2016, 11:36:57 UTC
Holy shit, Mel! That was. . . well, that was smoking hot, is what it was! JFC.

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_melodic_ September 2 2016, 13:29:08 UTC
Hehehe, thank you! <333

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shiftylinguini September 2 2016, 13:51:55 UTC
OMGOSH, well, this is just amazing and crazy hot, I love it! I have such a guilty love for daddy kink in certain pairings , and it works SO perfectly with these two! The first time Teddy says it, akjdfhgjdsg, and the spanking (sjfhgsdj'!!) omgosh, it's so hot and kinky and perfect!!

and I'm so spoiled and blushing and thrilled that it was my crossgen fic that turned you onto this pairing!! *beams like a loon* I love this pairing so much, I don't know what it is, but it just fucking rings my bell no end LOL and it makes SO HAPPY you like them too now, and that it resulted in you writing this gorgeous sexy thing!!!

<3333

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_melodic_ September 2 2016, 18:30:01 UTC
Yay!! I'm so pleased you like this fiction and that it did justice to the pairing you so gratefully introduced me to.

Hehe I had to throw in just a hint of spanking and I so love when the daddy!kink arises due to one partner slipping. ;]

Thank you for your lovely comment<333

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