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_alantie in _meansfallen

LOLA

Jun 13, 2005 03:03

Lola
Queer as Folk :: Brian/Justin fiction
PART THREE (of three)

Rated: Adults Only/NC-17

Summary: AU. Not much to be said. It's about Justin embracing his artistic side and being a lovely girl named Lola, whom Brian Kinney begrudgingly meets one night at Babylon...

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Cowlip. Unbetaed. And please JUST GIVE IT A ( Read more... )

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wethie June 13 2005, 19:54:32 UTC

OMFG!! I loved it.. I loved Lola!! I can't believe you're ending it!.. but then again I have to agree with a previous poster.. you don't want to ruin perfection!!

Weth

_alantie June 15 2005, 23:25:55 UTC

It wasn't supposed to be a novel like Straight!Brian... it was just supposed to... be. I wanted lots of people to be like "I wasn't going to read this, and then I did, and I'm sooooo glad I did." and that's what I've gotten from just three sections. So, it seemed okay to end it. There could possibly be a sequel though. I'm not sure.

ranksy June 13 2005, 20:18:15 UTC

That was perfection. I'm in love with Lola. Fucking fantastic.

You are amazing!

_alantie June 15 2005, 23:26:34 UTC

I think everyone is a little bit in love with Lola. Me most of all.

Thanks for the compliments and feedback. They make me glowy.

osmosis_bro June 13 2005, 21:01:54 UTC

so good.

love.

_alantie June 15 2005, 23:27:13 UTC

Glad you liked.

love back.

sunshineandrage June 13 2005, 21:30:22 UTC

OMG, I need a sequel, please! Or you could just write something else very soon, lol. Either way, I get brilliance! *worships you*

_alantie June 15 2005, 23:28:04 UTC

If I get inspired to write a sequel, one will be written.

And I am working on another fic right now with _pocket_rocket_, so patience!

sunshineandrage June 15 2005, 23:56:56 UTC

*sits quietly and waits*

kriken June 13 2005, 21:55:31 UTC

There were so many little things about this that I loved... Besides the overall hotness ;)

The subtle differences and distinctions you made between Justin and Lola and their effect on Brian, and how at the end, it really didn't matter - I think that was the best part of reading this.

Because the bottom fucking line is: Brian Kinney still only fucks men.

Red barrettes are just a bonus.

And that was perfect. Put a smirk on my face ;)

_alantie June 15 2005, 23:28:49 UTC

That was the intent. All of what you said was what I was trying to do. Thanks for affirming my writing. :-)