Comments | _lot49_: Fic::House::Objects in Motion[3b]

_lot49_

Fic::House::Objects in Motion[3b]

May 31, 2006 15:15

[Previous Parts]

[3b]

Those flowers again. Pretty roses perched in an equally pretty vase. Contrasting with the drab conference room; a dark, deep pink, unlike like the two blood-red coffee mugs beside it.

( They're the first thing his eyes gravitate to; what halts him abruptly in mid-step. )

fic, house, objects in motion

Comments 23

FINALLY!!!!! anonymous June 2 2006, 16:32:29 UTC

OMG!! OMG!!

Do you have any idea how long I have been waiting for this!?! This is, far and away, my absolute favorite House fic out there (and there are some good ones)! Please, don't ever make me wait that long for an update ever again. I thought my head was going to explode! You have just made my day!

Re: FINALLY!!!!! _lot49_ June 4 2006, 19:54:01 UTC

Sorry. My lack of attention span grabbed its snowboard and headed up into the mountains where it became obsessed with landing the perfect 360 McTwist to the detriment of everything else.

I really, really, will try to be a little more timely with the upcoming chapters.

chanel1224 June 3 2006, 00:47:10 UTC

She's positive for Chvostek's sign. We're running an ELISA and HPLC to confirm the diagnosis."

They're talking. Communicating. They're actually -

He half-turns from the conference table. Oh. Cameron. A quick, guilty glance back. Well, of course they're not saying anything. That would be insane.

I loved It
LOL.

_lot49_ June 4 2006, 19:55:35 UTC

Shh! They'll hear you. You can't trust them roses, you know. Evil things.

tranquil_eyes June 3 2006, 06:08:48 UTC

Oh dude... It may have taken a while but I'm so glad that you continued - still brilliant as ever.

I especially love your House/Stacy scene, not because I ship them in any way, but because even though their relationship makes me twitch, they were a big part of each other and lots of people ignore that. So thank you! Can't wait until next update!

_lot49_ June 4 2006, 20:13:19 UTC

House/Stacy on the screen didn't really bother me so much as bore me. Pity, because it seemed a waste in terms of character exploration of House and relationship dynamics.

Still, I don't hate Stacy, and she's useful in the few key scenes she has coming up, and I'm attempting to be fair with everybody's characterizations (though I'm having trouble writing Foreman - which is why he doesn't show up much so far).

housecam June 4 2006, 00:49:26 UTC

I just want to tell you that you have done the best characterization of House, Wilson..hell.. ALL the characters on this show that I have seen so far. There are so many parts in this fic that made me laugh out loud. Too many to list. You've got House's snark downpat. I LOVE this fic. And that last part in this chapter. Very sad.

You should be writing for this show. This fic is fucking awesome. KEEP WRITING!!!:P

_lot49_ June 4 2006, 20:16:55 UTC

If you're laughing, then it's not just funny in my head (comedy always makes me sweat bullets - you never know if it's a bomb or not until either the laughter or DEAD SILENCE hits).

Thank you for commenting.

dazed_jaded June 5 2006, 10:51:34 UTC

Wow, you are a really good writer. You have such a way with words and everyone is in character. Sorry if this review doesn't help much.

_lot49_ June 7 2006, 01:10:47 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!