House: Objects in Motion [3a]

Sep 17, 2005 13:52

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[3a]
See the roses? A distraction.

Ostentatious displays of affection do not impress her, especially in matters she would rather keep private, away from loose lips of prying co-workers and one particular, overbearing boss. Still, they are, undoubtedly pretty.

A sweet thought, really. )

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marcasite September 18 2005, 19:25:44 UTC
This is amazing. I am going to add this to my memories and make sure I read all the parts before! :)

You have a nice way with words and I felt like this story was so real.

Love it!

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_lot49_ September 19 2005, 18:31:24 UTC
Thank you! The departure from the OMGANGST is a great deal of fun to write.

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Props wiccagirl24 September 18 2005, 19:38:01 UTC
Fabulous story. Is there more? Love Houses pettiness, and his denial. Wilson knows him so well. Cameron and Foreman? Hope it's a temporary thing. Love it!

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Re: Props _lot49_ September 19 2005, 18:35:11 UTC
What? House, petty? No! No! He's ah...yeah, he's being petty. Cameron's not dating Foreman, though. She's dating a guy who House is vastly unimpressed with. Which would be...just about anybody, really. Thanks for reading!

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Re: Props wiccagirl24 September 19 2005, 19:00:01 UTC
Yeah... I was confused there for a while. Silly me, I read part three before 1 and 2. Still a fab story.

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katakombs September 18 2005, 20:00:30 UTC
A clue! you've left me a clue (the licorice) and now I can try to figure out the puzzle before the ducklings do.

Lots of fun things in this section -- Chase and Cameron psyching House out so well, Cuddy snark, the clinic patient, Wilson calling House out on his lying to himself, House regaining his lost ground by trying to torment Cameron.

And the next part is going to be up soon, you said?

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_lot49_ September 19 2005, 18:49:06 UTC
Patients sometimes may have multiple issues. Can't have it solved too quickly; there are still two chapters to go before the 47-minute mark and he still has someone's boyfriend to torture. Yeah.

I wanted to finish up the chapter this weekend, but ended up trimming the bushes after someone got attacked by a rasberry vine. Hangovers and gardening tools are not a good combination.

If people stop giving me work, I'm shooting for sometime Tuesday to wrap this bit up.

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ferox September 18 2005, 20:54:32 UTC
These read like actual episodes... that is QUITE the accomplishment, I next to never say that, even when people make the attempt to. The characters are spot on, the flow is right there... Bravo old (wo)man.

Spot of tea?

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_lot49_ September 19 2005, 18:58:45 UTC
Cheers!

I just keep imagining Hugh's face contorting through all the dialogue and it seems to work (even if everyone else thinks I'm nuts).

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anonymous September 18 2005, 21:55:16 UTC
This is better than the real thing!

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_lot49_ September 19 2005, 19:36:40 UTC
Ah :blush: I can't claim that. Just a momentary bit of amusement.

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