House: Objects at Rest [3]

Sep 04, 2005 11:22

Tempo change on the horizon: hyper-compressed moments, flashbacks, bits and pieces as experienced by an unreliable narrator. As House himself says, "Time is not a fixed construct."

Many thanks to treacle_a for the beta. She like, rules, and stuff.

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He'd died for a minute. Maybe two.

That was the easy part.

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vgsgirl March 3 2006, 03:01:34 UTC
After the last story of yours that i read, i just had to check out your other stuff. You are an amazing writer, i'm surprised no one has yet (apparently) found this story. I hope you keep writing, you really have a flair for it. This was another beautiful piece.

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eames_goren June 3 2006, 05:50:59 UTC
tis was awesome!!

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biases October 25 2006, 11:13:46 UTC
This is absolutely magnificent. You have such a unnerving mastery of words, you know what they mean and where to put them and string them into sentences that just roll around in my head. It's fantastic. It's...I have no more adjectives. The excellence of this story has completely stripped me of things to say. All I can do is mem this and move on to read everything else you've ever written.

Thank you for writing.

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nurse_stiney March 6 2007, 23:20:49 UTC
Wow. That was just so ridiculously painful, everything in me just either clenched or shattered into a bajillion pieces.
Just...OUCH.
Is this the end of the story? Because what a way to end it. ::shakes head:: I love it, but...OUCH. :)

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