Nathan Barley fic: Memoria (2/3)

[_emomuffin]

Title: Memoria (2/3)
Pairing: Dan/Jonatton, Dan/Jones
Summary: They’d had more than a decade to skate around their issues and they were on thinner ice now than they’d ever been. A direct continuation from where the last part ended: the aftermath of the break up.
Word Count: 9,511
Rating: NC-17...ish. Maybe a hard R?
Warnings: Swearing, sex,

Comments

[doctorpancakes]

*head explodes*

Flipping heck, luv. This is just making me want to hug each and every one of them because they're all so fucked up and it's so fucking good and YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I STILL AM THAT SOMEBODY ELSE IS WRITING THIS PAIRING because they're amazing. This is amazing. I love you.

[_emomuffin]

Awww, yay! I always look forward to your comments on my fic :D

And I knoooow, I want to hug them all, too. I started thinking how much better off they'd all be if they were just all in a relationship with each other, so I started writing a Jonatton/Dan/Jones threesome fic, but...Jonatton was just not having it. XD

Also, our icons are talking on the phone again ;D

[gurkboll]

Ooh this is really good! There aren't enough fic involving Jonatton, and I love him and Dan in this! Amazing :D

[gurkboll]

Sorry for double comments but this: "He’d rather have Dan hate him than not feel anything for him at all." <3

[_emomuffin]

No need to be sorry! I'm glad to read as many comments as you want to give me, haha. And yeaaah, I wish more people wrote Jonatton!

Thanks for reading :D

[pitpony13]

I love all the dynamism and emotion in this! I'm looking forward to the last chapter!

[_emomuffin]

Thanks :D

[thehomicidehoe]

I love this so much! Your characterizations are like the most perfectly perfect EVER.

I could gush all dday, but I doubt it'd be legible so I'll just leave it there!

[_emomuffin]

Aww, thanks so much :D

[falltotry]

oh hay, i forgot to comment on how awesome this is! you are seriously making me love jonatton/dan SO MUCH. but especially jonatton because i want to punch dan in the eye, since several pages of pure ashcroft-personality without the filter of how jam hot julian barratt is just brings the rage. WHAT A DIIIIIIICK. also, it's kind of uncomfortable how much i'm identifying with jonatton here :( i don't want to think i'm that fucked up, and i REALLY hope i'm not that much of a douche, but lots of these scenes seem RIPPED FROM MY LIFE which is weird and exacerbates my longing to punch dan in the eye.

here are some lines i like a lot!

“Hey Dan, remember when we were happy? Remember vodka water balloons and too many pills and not enough sense? Remember Dan? Remember?” Jonatton spoke at the mobile in his hand; the one he’d taken the battery out of hours ago, so he couldn’t accidently call Dan to actually speak to him, no matter how pissed he got. His tone was mocking, and he thought it a first that he was actually mocking himself.WAY TO BREAK

[_emomuffin]

Yaaay, you commented :D I always love your comments so much. ...And I love you that much more for using the term 'jam hot' because I thought I was the only one even in Boosh fandom to say that. XD

Oh, I totally over identify with Jonatton, too. A large portion of this whole fic series is me working out my feelings about my own exes, haha.

And I totallyyyy tried to write a threesome fic and Jonatton was totally not having those shenanigans. Buuut there are more things to come! After the final part of this, I have a fic set some indeterminate time after this that deals with the finale of Nathan Barley, aka Dan getting out of the hospital and then Jones and Jonatton having to deal with each other and take care of Dan.

BUT YEAH, PART THREE SHOULD BE UP TUESDAY :D