fic: Tarnished

[_emomuffin]

Tarnished
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,343
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: John/Gwen/(Jack)
Disclaimer: I have nothing to do with the series, blah blah.
Summary: In the end, John always wins.
Spoilers: Takes place directly after 2x01 ‘Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang’
Author's Note: This is for kijikun, for the Gwen ficathon. I hope you like it, dear!

Comments

[missbadwolf]

Oooo oh wow this was really good!

[lightz474]

That was really great. I loved how you wrote this. I'm a huge John/Gwen/Jack fan. I didn't really expect the end with John thinking that. Great work on this. ♥

[anonymous]

Wow. This is...kind of not great. Your characters are all over the place and don't seem very accurate to Torchwood at all...

[_emomuffin]

Really? Huh. It's one of my favourite things I've written in this fandom.

Any suggestions on what you'd do to make it better?