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Apr 21, 2008 06:04

I don't normally go online before work, for the very good reason that it is STUPID EARLY, and while I can manage to get myself out of the house by seven am, most of it's just well practised sleepwalking. But today is a special day!

First thing: extreme happy birthday wishes to the very wonderful leliseSecond thing: it is my turn for Awesome April fic, ( Read more... )

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turps33 April 21 2008, 11:07:16 UTC
Wow. This really is a wonderful look at them all, especially Justin who needs so badly to be loved. You have them all down, and I especially loved the end part with Chris.

Just amazing.

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_ducks April 21 2008, 21:17:26 UTC
Thank you!

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pensnest April 21 2008, 11:35:31 UTC
This is a delight. You convey Justin's need to be *loved* so well, and I've always thought that's one of the most important things about him. The scene with Chris is really excellent.

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_ducks April 21 2008, 21:18:34 UTC
Thank you!

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msktrnanny April 21 2008, 12:24:10 UTC
This turned out beautifully. I actually like Justin's repetition of 'Lance's mom doesn't like me', it works really well. And the changes you've made are awesome. And Justin still doesn't really get what he wants in the end. Awesome job!

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_ducks April 21 2008, 21:19:18 UTC
Thank you! And thanks for your help - I was going to send the final version back to you, but time crept up on me.

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ephemera April 21 2008, 14:06:35 UTC
oh - wow - such a fabulous creepy!baby!Justin, and a totally believable one. Fantastic!

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_ducks April 21 2008, 21:20:12 UTC
Thank you!

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_ducks April 21 2008, 21:20:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

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