Comments | _beetle_: Prompt Fic: "Dancing About Architecture", (2/2), Genderswap!Sulu/Chekov, NC-17

_beetle_

Prompt Fic: "Dancing About Architecture", (2/2), Genderswap!Sulu/Chekov, NC-17

Mar 02, 2010 01:32

Posted in its entirety in my DW, and broken into two parts here for sheer awesomeness.

Dancing About Architecture (2/2)
Author: _beetle_
Beta: vinniebatman ::waves ( Read more... )

girl!kirk, girl!sulu, st: xi, sulu/kirk, sulu/chekov, girl!chekov

Comments 9

vinniebatman March 2 2010, 23:51:30 UTC

Not only did seeing my changes and suggestions make me feel all happy and warm, but I thoroughly approved of the additional details and sexings. Good jorb! I love this story, its so sweet and angsty and sexy. Hmm... I think I told you that before, but nevertheless, these comments still totally apply. So, I think you should do a drabble series next. About Flight of the Con- er, I mean, a follow up to this story where Kirk figures out her feelings and starts the seductioning of Dr. McCoy. Because I love me some Dr. McCoy. *imagines, drools*

*hugs*

~Alice~

_beetle_ March 23 2010, 02:30:09 UTC

A follow-up is certainly not out of the realm of possibility, but this'll have to do for now :)

katmarajade March 3 2010, 10:11:22 UTC

What an interesting story-- I don't read much genderbending, so I still get a little confused at times, trying to figure out who's been swapped and who hasn't, but this was an interesting foray into it for me! Thanks! And I really enjoyed Hikaru-- and liked the contrast in how she liked Kirk and Chekova in such very different roles. Chekova with her pink bows and cotton panties was adorable. The bit in the brig with Riley was wonderful. And my favorite part was in Hikaru's room after she gets out of the brig. That conversation. Amazing. I liked Hikaru explaining her intentions and Chekova being all defensive and interrupting. And just to keep you informed as to my intentions, if the whole girlfriend-thing goes as well as I know it will, I'd like you to be my wife. You know, someday If that's okay with you.
I just see her saying this so sincerely and it's the sweetest thing.
Then she's throwing long, surprisingly strong arms around Hikaru and hugging her hard and speaking in tear-logged Russian ( ... )

_beetle_ March 21 2010, 17:41:31 UTC

Wow.

Best. Comment. EVER!

And I still have no coherent response to it. I mean--there was quotage!
::swoons::

bookaddict43 March 3 2010, 11:24:25 UTC

*grins at you* Well I certainly didn't expect that answer to my prompt :) Surprises are awesome!

I don't read genderswap fics at all if I can help it, and I did it for you bb. And I wasn't disappointed!

I like the developing story between Hikaru and Chekova and love that Jenn wouldn't continue the sexual part of the relationship once they got together.

Great job! I'll have to give you more prompts!

_beetle_ March 21 2010, 17:00:14 UTC

Hee, this wouldn't get written--absolutely refused to until I swapped some genders. It was fun :D

And an amazing prompt.

I may write some Riley/boy!Chapel and/or Jenn/McCoy in this 'verse, maybe babysitting little Maksim.

blcwriter March 4 2010, 02:12:54 UTC

I'm incapable of the comments this wonderfulness really deserves, but it is. Wonderfulness.

_beetle_ March 21 2010, 16:53:54 UTC

Thanks, lol.

I don't know where it came from, other than a desire to see girl!Sulu, for once :D

And I loves me a pregnant!girl!Chekov.

rubynye July 25 2010, 16:31:15 UTC

I had this in my files to read for such a long time, and someone's Femslash Day rec reminded me -- I wish I remembered who so I could thank them. I really love how you interwove TOS canon and everyone's personalities into this seamless whole!