Comments | _ame_no_chikara: [Fic] The Rise and Fall of Gabriel Gray

_ame_no_chikara

Nov 09, 2007 22:08

Title: The Rise and Fall of Gabriel Gray
By:Ame no Chikara
Word Count: 1,577
Rating: PG, I guess
Pairings: None! I think this is the first non-pairing fic I've ever written.
Summary: The evolution of Gabriel Gray into Sylar

( Gabriel Gray understood how clocks worked. He knew how all the pieces fit, how everything clicked together perfectly, and exactly how long a second took. )

Comments 14

dana_serenity November 10 2007, 12:31:36 UTC

Oh my. This was perfect! I think you perfectly captured the Gabriel turning into Sylar thing. Love his vision on time as well. Great work!

_ame_no_chikara November 10 2007, 16:37:58 UTC

Thank you very much for reading this~<3!

lilian1977 November 10 2007, 19:06:02 UTC

That's really good, well done :) x

_ame_no_chikara November 10 2007, 20:19:04 UTC

Thank you~!

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_ame_no_chikara November 11 2007, 01:03:55 UTC

Thanks very much =)

vaeltaa November 11 2007, 00:46:45 UTC

This was amazing! Really wonderful, I loved reading it.

_ame_no_chikara November 11 2007, 01:04:32 UTC

Thank you very much! It's my first fic on Sylar so I was worried I had gotten him a tad out of character

anonymous November 11 2007, 05:32:01 UTC

Oh Jeez.

_ame_no_chikara November 11 2007, 07:52:50 UTC

Your face is oh Jeez >_>