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Stranded, Chapter 1

Dec 14, 2011 07:25

Title: Stranded
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Luke and Reid are on their way to their honeymoon when their plane hits some turbulence...
Author's Notes: I wrote the first draft of this for NaNoWriMo, which was a great challenge and lots of fun! I didn’t reach the 50k word count goal, but the fic is now complete and I'll be posting a chapter a ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

Comments 57

ludagurl3d December 14 2011, 00:06:51 UTC

I only had time to read half - will read the other half tonight, - but this looks soooo good. I really like the two cliches you have combined here. Haven't been this excited about a fic posting since "Vegas."

_alicesprings December 14 2011, 20:58:39 UTC

Aww, that's so sweet! Thank you very much! :D

ladysalieri December 14 2011, 01:35:54 UTC

Whee!!! I've been DYING for a good, long, yummy LuRe fic to read, and with this fantastic start of yours, it's like an early Christmas present!

I am just LOVING this idea, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)

_alicesprings December 14 2011, 20:59:15 UTC

Aww, that's so nice! Thank you very much! Glad you're enjoying it so far! :D

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_alicesprings December 14 2011, 20:59:26 UTC

Thank you! :D

nancygrew December 14 2011, 01:57:03 UTC

Fantastic fic! Such a great idea and so well-written. Very in character for both.

“Noah can see?” Luke’s grin is breathtaking, and inexplicably, Reid feels a twinge of jealousy. Luke is his husband, jealousy over Noah Mayer at this point would be just ridiculous.

“Yeah,” Reid says curtly. “He can see, he’s been pursuing a film career in L.A.”

“That’s incredible!” Luke beams. “Thank you, Dr. Oliver!”

Reid frowns. "Can I have my wedding ring back now, Mr. Snyder?"

SUCH a great passage. Reid's jealousy. Luke's happiness for Noah even knowing that they're not together anymore. Luke's gratitude to Reid.

However, I do feel bad for poor John.

_alicesprings December 14 2011, 21:00:26 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! :D

Yeah, poor John. :(

on_the_ground December 14 2011, 02:22:11 UTC

This is all kinds of AWESOME.

LOVE BOTH CLICHES SO MUCH LOL.. and love even more your writing <3 Reid going through this sort of pain is very sad and lots of fun to read.. can't wait for chapter 2! Thank you!! ;)

_alicesprings December 14 2011, 21:00:51 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! Happy you're enjoying it! :D