Comment fic.

Nov 07, 2011 13:56

I wrote this ages ago, in Rhi's journal, as a response to her comment fic, which you can read here!I was going to add to it, and expand on Rhi's comment, (which I'll put after the fic), but between uni and Nano and everything else, I know I'll never do it, so I thought I'd just go ahead and post what I've got. It's short, and kind of pointless, but ( Read more... )

comment fic, luke/reid, my fic

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amelialourdes November 7 2011, 07:23:22 UTC
"I knew Reid wasn't right for you, that he'd hurt you."

BITCH, PLZ. I WILL CUT CHOO.

That deserves a blow job, Luke decides.

YEAH, IT TOTALLY, TOTALLY DOES.

\o/

So awesome, bb! <3

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_alicesprings November 7 2011, 07:26:05 UTC
Aww, thank you, bb! I'm so glad you liked it! <3

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astrolatryae November 7 2011, 10:54:25 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THEM SO MUCH! YOU ARE TOO GOOD ALICE. TOO GOOD.

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_alicesprings November 7 2011, 21:04:04 UTC
AWW! Thank you! You are too nice! :D

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theshahofblah November 7 2011, 12:24:59 UTC
Ooooh, I love love LOVE this!!

Especially this:
When Reid bursts in to their apartment that night, angrily tugging off his tie and throwing his briefcase toward the couch, Luke knows he's still just as pissed as he was that morning.
"Don't start!" Reid says, holding up one hand. "I am not going to your stupid third cousin's brother's mother's uncle's baby shower and that's the end of it!"
Just the whole picture of it, Reid holding on to his indignation all day, just to pick up where they left off is just priceless. More foreplay ;)

And I love that Noah really doesn't get it.

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_alicesprings November 7 2011, 21:05:16 UTC
Just the whole picture of it, Reid holding on to his indignation all day, just to pick up where they left off is just priceless. More foreplay ;)

Hee! That's totally how I picture their fights. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

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