A Stable Heart, Chapter 7

Aug 28, 2011 08:43

Title: A Stable Heart
Written By: _alicesprings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: AU. When Luke has to hide out from the Grimaldi family, taking a job as a stable hand in Dallas seems like the perfect solution. It’s too bad Luke’s new “boss” Dr. Reid Oliver is such a jerk.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the wonderful and very patient peggin for her generous donation in ( Read more... )

luke/reid, my fic

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95baker August 28 2011, 01:14:22 UTC
Oh my. I just found this story and read all seven chapters. You definitely should write multi-chapter fics. It is brillant. I was so convinced that Annie was going to die. But now I am still worried. Why is that?

These two are beyond sexy but I feel that we are headed for rocky roads.

Just love it.

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_alicesprings August 28 2011, 22:24:22 UTC
Aww, thanks so much for the lovely feedback! Thanks for letting me know! :)

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bjshipper August 28 2011, 01:54:51 UTC
Great story. Very in character despite the AU. Also, going back to other chapters, I really like the story within a story because I kind of like historical AUs but it can been hard to suspend your disbelief sometimes but this way, it's intended to be read as fiction rather than our characters in a real historical situation so it's somehow more palatable if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter. It's great that you completed it before starting to post- that's a rare treat. :)

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_alicesprings August 28 2011, 22:25:35 UTC
What a wonderful comment! Thank you so much!

I kind of like historical AUs but it can been hard to suspend your disbelief sometimes but this way, it's intended to be read as fiction rather than our characters in a real historical situation so it's somehow more palatable if that makes sense.

Makes total sense! I'm really glad it worked for you in this capacity. Thanks again for the feedback! The final chapter is now up. I hope you enjoy it. :)

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on_the_ground August 28 2011, 02:16:31 UTC
Another great chapter <3 Hot sex and awesome dialogues.. :D poor Reid is gonna be devastated when he's told the news.. :(

Thank you! ;)

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_alicesprings August 28 2011, 22:26:00 UTC
Thank you!!! :)

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nancygrew August 28 2011, 03:30:05 UTC
So great! Love how close Luke and Reid have gotten. So happy you didn't kill off Annie. It's actually pretty suspenseful about what's going to happen between Luke and Reid. Everythings still so new and they both have responsibilities and lives in different cities.

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_alicesprings August 28 2011, 22:26:29 UTC
They do! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I hope you enjoy the final chapter. :)

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smittle August 28 2011, 03:41:14 UTC
Great chapter! I'm so relieved for Annie although I'm not gonna assume that she's out of the woods just yet. It's so fun to see Luke and Reid in such a domestic routine yet still so hot for each other. I know that Luke's love for his family is such a key part of who he is, but he's built so much in Texas, not just with Reid, but with Victoria, Juan, Laura and Annie and he's also writing again, so I kind of want him to stay and run the foundation from there. I know, no spoilers, I'll just have to wait for your happy ending which I know will be glorious and perfect. In the meantime, we have lovely scenes of Reid picking out a stuffed toy and grooming horses, Reid riding Luke, chili-burning sex, and post-kidney-convo making love. That's a lot of fabulousness!

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_alicesprings August 28 2011, 22:27:15 UTC
Thank you soooooooo much for this, and all the wonderful comments you've left so far! I appreciate it more than I can say! Hope you enjoy the final chapter. :)

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