fic: A Soundless Calm (1/1)

[_airbear_]

Summary: Another one shot. I went romantic this time because I desperately needed it. Blair and Chuck outside in the snow. “You can’t run very far in this weather, Blair." But the soft crunch atop the bed of flattened snow followed her, haunted her and was sure to taper off at some disappointing moment.

Author's Note: Thank you Lynne for being

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[_airbear_]

LOL at first I was terrified because there are actually some typos I haven't fixed in this and i felt terrible. But then it made me laugh out loud. Seriously, Spike would have totally followed Buffy around while she huffed and was angry. It's basically all he did! While being snarky too.

And I can picture it too! I just want to film it so badly.

[lynniepearl]

Whoops. I'm sorry. Typos.... *looks ashamed*... (he he he, this reminds me of my disclaimer...) On that note, check out your private messages. :)

Also, you know I love this piece. I think I forgot to tell you just how much. It's because it was bittersweet and exactly what I could picture happening. Chuck would finally get it right and then walk away. And I also fell in love with the same line that Red did. It was perfect Chuck. I think that he would follow her to the ends of the earth, until his last breath, regardless of if it hurt him or not. They can't give up on each other, even if they want to. It's who they are, it who they'll be and it's who they need the other to be.

:)

[cynicalshadows]

I was reminded a bit of a Spike/Buffy scene too, but I think that's just because their love was epic as well and Buffy made Spike want to be a better man like Blair does for Chuck. Very well done, regardless. I was cracking up at the end when he says he loves her and walks away, and she chases after him calling him a son of a bitch! Totally in character! Great job.

[_airbear_]

I was definitely getting some Spuffy flashbacks in terms of Spike wanting to be better as a man. I even looked up quotes etc. and felt all nostalgic. I definitely felt a slight connection to the two ships while writhing this, at least in the beginning. Spike's love was selfish and first and then turned into something entirely sacrificial and selfless which was incredible, so this strayed from that a bit. I wanted to make CB in this piece very reminiscent of the romantic era f literature, and I keep thinking Wuthering Heights' Catherine and Heathcliff.

[isabellecs]

omg, Air - so good! I loved it! So very poetic!

[_airbear_]

Thanks Belle! I'm so so glad you liked it. :D

[_airbear_]

hahaha that'd be so funny. With a post it note on top saying" Seriously. Do this now please since you can't do it yourselves!" I just pictured this as being so like what I would want from them.

[likeohmygod_x]

So perfect. I need not add more to this comment.
Simply perfect. <333

[_airbear_]

awww thank you! Short and sweet reviews are always good too ;)