Wicked Game (Chapter Two)

[zydrateoverdose]

Title: Wicked Game
Rating: R for language

Summary: Bam and Ville meet in a small cafe in West Chester as teenagers. Once Ville leaves to go back to Finland, Bam forgets about his existence, but Bam never leaves Ville's thoughts. When Ville comes back to America he's dead set on turning Bam's 'perfect' life upside-down.
Authors Notes: This took longer

Comments

[slasher48]

*eff fucking cee*

Je t'aime! I'm glad you're giving us another chapter!

*rushes off to read*

[zydrateoverdose]

*hands you FC trophy*

I sure hope you like it. ^.^

[slasher48]

Bam's***
his* brother's* case
was* silent
swing's*
Converse*

Oooh. Getting a bit close to home for you, huh, BamBam? If you can't say it, you probably don't feel it...and if you don't feel it, then you should not be married, nor the father to her child. Just a bit of advice for you, cop-boy. ;)

I love how you make it clear that Bam's aching for something, but not what he's aching for. Could Ville fill that space? Or is he just missing Jess? (By the way, that's heartbreaking. I would just die if something happened to my sibs!)

A swingset in the middle of the winter. The two of them unwillingly drawn to each other. It's fucking beautiful, that's what it is. I don't even need to tell you I need more, do I? ♥

[zydrateoverdose]

What would I do without your correcting? :P You're amazing.
And yes, silly Bammie, can't you tell that Missy's not the one for you! Sheesh.
Sorry about Jess :( I didn't really want to kill him, but I thought it would be important to the story.
Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you liked it!

[zydrateoverdose]

I'm glad you liked!
We'll just have to see if we have the same idea ;)
Thanks for the comment.

[marjohn666valo]

Oh god, i love a flirtatious Ville! He's so yummy =p~ and of course he's gonna win Bam over; no one in their right mind can ever resist a Valo's seduction :D I guess Razorbladesun and I share the same twist ;)

[zydrateoverdose]

So true, we're all powerless to Ville's seduction. :P

[loki_the_sinner]

I likeeee it lol
But why did Jess have to dieeeeeeeeee!
I'm not into necrophilia...and I want to be in his pants...so that's no good...
I feel bad for BamBam's wifey but him and Ville clearly belong together...o_o
I'd leave a better comment...but I'm half asleep and listening to I Set My Friends on Fire...and hardcore dancing...and my child is throwing a tantrum because I won't let her break my phone... -_-
More sooooon i hope!

[zydrateoverdose]

Haha sorry for killing Jess, it juts had to be done :( Sorry Jess!
Hardcore dancing FTW!
Thank you for commenting and I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[lilafilly2]

Oooo, good one V. You are a clever fuck.

Yes! So glad you posted! I pictured this park as a little one wit ht wo swings next t oeach other close to where I used to live :D