Help me Forget (One-shot)

[marjohn666valo]

Title: Help Me Forget

Rating: PG-13

Paring: Vam, Bam/Missy

Summery: “If I tell you my biggest heart desire, will you tell me yours?” you were hugging your knees, your head resting upon them. You were only 29, recently engaged to a beautiful Finnish model, but looking so lonely there one could never guess. “It’s Jonna; everyone knows that.” Your eyes

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[lvr_girl616]

My god, this was beautiful. Loved it!

Made me feel all kinds of emotions....jesus christ. When I can stop rambling, I'll follow up to this comment =)

♥ ♥ ♥

XoxxOxOXOX

[marjohn666valo]

Thank you for reading and commenting!
Indeed the range of emotions was very vast in this one, I hope not too vast for a one-shot :)

I'm actually very curious to know how you exactly felt while reading it; I remember when i first wrote it I felt suffocated; that's why the ending turned out to be an open one, whereas originally i wanted it to have an almost tragic ending. I'm wondering if it was the case with you, too or i was just going through some sort of personal breakdown?

I'll be glad to hear more from you if you ever decided to :D

[marjohn666valo]

Thank you very much for reading and commenting :) I'm glad you liked it :D

[noita0]

Wow, bittersweet flow through the whole story!
my interpretation of thei situation is the following:
A broken relationship with someone you love(d) can't be put under a carpet and then it's ok. Because it rotts there and gives a bad smell which invades your life. You have to take it out a hundred of times, look at it, think of it till it is finally dry and safe.
But when you are doing it alone, you start to turn around yourself, you need the other one to really understand.
And when you understand most of it, you may discover that it is still alive and it is possible to give it a new start (which doesn't guarantee it works better this time), or you are enough at peace with it for what it was to let it go.
Thanks for the story!

[marjohn666valo]

Oh thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

I could never put it better than you did :D
indeed 'we may be through with the past, but the past ain't through with us - Magnolia" you can't just run away from your uncertainties and pretend they're not there anymore. Your subconscious can be a real b*tch sometimes :D

I'm just afraid Ville may be having a hard time getting over Bam...and who knows? maybe Bam finally comes to his senses and gives in to the sweet temptation that is Ville's love :D

[annushkazhivago]

I've been trying to read this for days.

I'm glad they were able to still be friends in the end. I'm still holding out hope that one day they'll find their way back to each other. They both clearly still have feelings for one another.
Wonderful job!

[marjohn666valo]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting :D you know it means a lot to me♥♥♥

and yeah, just as soon as Bam gets his head out of the gutter, those two are gonna stick together for life :D

[fleur_de_ylang]

Sorry for delayed comment, darling:-)

You took me by surprise in this one:-)

PM-ing again.

[marjohn666valo]

Yay!!!!!!!! *runs to read the PM, heart racing*