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[kittenfawn]

Title: A Surprise

Comments

[asilversixpence]

GAH! That was SO not a happy ending. But the somberness does add an elegant quality to it. Although this sentence did make me really, really happy: Bam and Ville did everything together, and once they even kissed. However, they decided to try other people, and both were still really happy. They were happy because they promised never to hurt each other, and stop immediately if they did. In the end, they chose each other. So very cute. But the happiness ends there. :(

Ville made of porceline? Brilliant, especially since his skin is the color of fine china. No wonder he didn't like physical activity. And when he breaks apart? Never saw that coming. And although I have an affinity for trees, especially one's that talk, that queen trapped inside was an ultimate biotch. That last line she said to Ville makes me wonder if they had a relationship in the past, and if so, what kind?

I like. :)

(Inspired by me? Wow. Never thought that would happen. Like, ever. Srsly. <3)

[poisonxangel]

awesomely written, and wonderfully unexpected. beautiful!

[slasher48]

So very, very morbid.

But I loved. :)

[ex_mikkosgr]

wow that was interesting! i really liked it. :)

[alicez17]

Yes, this was a very lovely (though I don't know if that's the right word:)) read. Chilling and omnious at times, but overal a very good concept. The fact that Ville's skin is porceline, seems highly original to me, and very believable too.

And as I do love fairy tales with a dark twist to it, the Queen (though she did scare me) was a good addition to the story. Are you planning on a sequel?

'Cause I would love to read more:)