Tinkerbelle Pt. 1

[asilversixpence]

Title:  Tinkerbelle
Author: asilversixpence
Rating:  R
Parings:  ...Vam?
Disclaimer:  Fantasy is not reality...or is it?
Summary:  Tinkerbelle can shove it.
Author's Note:  Argh. I was so determined to finish this one. I really like how it came out and I hope you do too. Please let me know what you think. And feel free to point out mistakes. :D

Comments

[have_666_mercy]

oh my valo, that was certainly hot. and extremely beautiful.

He bit into the tissue deeply, nectar staining his chin and neck crimson as it ran down in rivers. Ville leaned down and opened Bam’s mouth with his own to share a bloody kiss, passing the fruit between his lips with his tongue. Bam opened all too eagerly and found his lips lingering on the other’s longer than necessary, relishing the aftertaste dancing on his tongue.

loved this part. GAH!
i cannot even really comment. just hoping you will continue writing it. a second chapter?

[asilversixpence]

Thankies. The funny thing was that I wasn’t thinking about adding a sex scene at all and then at the last minute when I was touching things up just hit me in the head. I had to write it down at least to see if it worked, and then I just kept going…hee hee hee. And after I did write it I couldn't believe that came out of my brain.

Ooh, really? Now I'll wonder why you like that part so much.

I wasn't planning on doing a sequal but if I get an idea I'll try to persue it. :)

[asilversixpence]

*blushes* Enchanted is such a strong word...but thanks anyway. :)

[alicez17]

Oh.

...

Now this, was an excellent Halloween fic. You managed to pull me to the edge of my seat, and leave me with no finger nails. You wrote this in a dark, sinister, omnious, terifying (sorry no other words come to me) and yet so delicious way.

I absolutely loved the imaginary you used hear; the fact that Ville was a 'faerie', but one with talons, a dark lust (and no wings?), the moment when Bam eats the fruit and the moment when

"The vile roots that had grafted to the pit of his belly retreated as if they were sprayed with weed killer. It was as if Ville had somehow infused magic into his voice and his body was eager to comply."

just.. gah. You rendered me speechless.

I actually also never took Bam for a sci-fi nerd, but you really managed to convince me here.

This is definitely going into my "top-5-Halloween" favourites;)

[alicez17]

Christ, my spelling is atrocious:

of course I meant:

*you used here

and

*terrifying

[asilversixpence]

But you need your fingernails! Delicious is good...I was going for delicious. :) And I'm glad you enjoy imagery because I like descriptions. It seems like every other word that pops outta my head is an adjective.

And as much as I appreciate your comment this can't be apart of your top five because it's way too early. There are other people who are writing stuff and personally I'm rooting for annushkazhivago, among others, because she is the master of the vam horror genre, and whatever she writes is gold. Seriously, read The Hitchiker.

But maybe I'll write something else for Halloween...

[swirlsandstars]

Oh wow. Yeah, I think I love you for writing this :)

“I am what you want me to be,” he smiled,

Gaaaah. I absolutely adore this whole thing, because it's so beautifully sinister and magical. I also really, really like the way you wrote Ville, all dark and mysterious but damn irresistable too. The imagery was so well written, it all just fit in perfectly. The bit with the tattoo? Absolutely freaking amazing. The way is went from pain to pleasure...yeah, I certainly would not mind meeting a faerie like Ville. My favourite line by far;

His inhibitions died as Ville egged him on, purring yes, yes, yessss, and a firm finger coasted up the inside of his thigh. Just because. There needs to be no more explanation than that :)

This has made me look forward to Halloween, it was a perfect fic to go along with it :D

(And yes, you can write, there was never any doubt about this, and this just proves it immensely! :P)

Love you! :) <3

[asilversixpence]

Hee. :)

I actually wasn't going to have Ville respond but I think his character forced me to. *sigh* I enjoyed writing him and if I do write something else akin to this I'll try to explore his character more. He was very vague and aloof in this one. Imagery is like an extension of my arm basically, so I can't not write about it. Me and my descriptions. *shakes head* The tattoo part was also added in at the last minute; I was just going to have the fruit part and leave it at that (Why does it seem like I always try to throw the good parts away?).

Ha! You may not mind meeting a faerie like Ville but I might. Faeries can be pretty but they're scary fuckers...

Ooh, I likd that sentece too. :) And as for the writing, sometimes my muse strikes me but she usually avoids me like the plague so I have to fend for myself. *grumbles* But she helped me with this so I'm forever grateful. :D

Love you more! :) <3