There's talk of a new HIM album already...

[migemanson]

Probably old news. Ville's said the next one will be in a rougher direction than the last... nice.

Anyone know how to get Negative cds without having to order them over the internet since the music shops I've searched through in Leeds don't sell it?

Title: As Red As
Pairing: Ooh, I wonder…
Genre: Angsty angst… seriously.
Summary: “I can't keep

Comments

[war_of_ataraxis]

You have a rather interesting sentence structure; I actually really enjoy it.

I enjoyed this story as well, a darker side of the love. Good job.

[migemanson]

Oh, thanks. ^_^

I wrote a few versions, each with varying sentence structure but I think it's more dreamlike and unreal with shorter sentences (Like nerakrose suggests below). And it just flows better...

I'm glad you liked it and congrats on the FC.

[migemanson]

I did wonder about making it more descriptive but simpler sentences, a simpler story sometmes portrays the emotions easier, y'know? I agree that it's similar to a dream/nightmare, but then that on reflects upon the plot: dream turned nightmare.

Thanks for the comment.

[ville_drool]

this was a wonderful fic, i like the use of present tense...it adds to the moment,and the tension...kind of surreal.

it's written really sensually, but that's kind of battling with the actual act of what's happening...it's almost like you have to read it twice to make yourself believe that it's really happening, cos something written so beautifully can't possibly be about that, you know? (or that could be just me!)

this line is my favourite out of the whole piece: * I cradle your soft arousal in my hands*

that's utterly heartbreaking. it's heartbreaking that bam can make himself believe that ville is aroused, and heartbreaking because if he's soft, then he's not aroused.

i hope i'm making sense lol!

[migemanson]

I'm glad you think it's wonderful. My intentions were to create a surreal, dream-like/nightmare-like moment where the plot almost contradicted the writing (I think that's what you're trying to say). I'm also glad that you think it's beautifully written. I tried to stray away from the typical rape story that, as a reader, I think "over describe" the situation. It's best that emptions are felt in their simplest form so it's easier to portray, y'know?

I can understand your choice of favourites. It's contradictory and... I think, alluring. You're right when you say it's heartbreaking.

And yes, you are making sense. I just hope I am, lol.
Thanks for the comment.

[ville_drool]

I'm glad I made some sense lol;-)

and yep, using emotions and not just actions makes more of an impact to the reader.

[003lastwords]

great title.
this was written so gorgeously.
is gorgeously a word?
if it's not, then oh well, this deserves a new word.
i like your styleee =D
i also LOVE your icon, is that jonne?
(i'm just full of compliments.)
lovelovelove.

[migemanson]

Thanks and thanks again.
If it's not a word, we'll make it a word, lol.
I was worried about the style but I suppose it differs from the other rape stories for being so simply written.
Yes, it is the gorgeous Jonne. I'm glad you like it. :D

Thanks for you comment and compliments.

[drunkonhim]

ooooo...i liked it. very well written. but in these kind of stories, why is Bam always the one raping Ville?

i think you messed up one part tho: your soft chocolate-coloured eyes, now dark

sorry im anal about little things. again great story!

[migemanson]

Thanks for liking it. I don't know why I chose Bam to rape Ville. This story was already different in the way it was written and that set up was common ground to start on, I guess.

It's a shame I slipped up on the colour of his eyes. Why the hell did I put chocolate-coloured when they're bloody green?!?!
Thanks for pointing it out... I'll be sure to not fuck up next time, lol.

Thanks for your comment.