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The Boy Who Looked Like a Girl
I absolutely had to start this story or I was going to go insane. I wrote out four parts already to make sure I wouldn't quit after chapter one, like I tend to do sometimes. I like this idea and hopefully you do as well. I will post the first two parts tonight and the rest tomorrow.
I play this story off of Ville's adrogynous looks. I got a really screwed up idea from it. Do not read this story if you aren't willing to deal with extremely dark subjects and some heavy angst. Also, there are religious discussions through out, although that isn't the main focus as of now.
Title: The Boy Who Looked Like a Girl
Prologue
Rating: R
Warnings: Extremely dark subjects, random religious discussions
Thanks/Dedication: Darling, you didn't give me your name so I don't know how to give you credit, but big thanks to my translator! You know who you are, doll. xoxoxo
AU: Ville's only a year older than Bam. Ville's parents send him to America to go to school.
Summary: His androgynous looks fuel lustful looks and he's grown accostumed to it, but when the annoying boy from his new school gives him a look full of everything but . . . his life becomes even harder to control, to understand.
The Boy Who Looked Like a Girl
Prologue
"You're never going to be normal. You look too pretty, too much like a girl. You look so young for your age, like a piece of art. You're timeless, classic. Beautiful people are never appreciated until they're older. But I appreciate you now. You understand that, right?"
"But . . . I-I'm . . . not s'pposed to."
"But if feels good, doesn't it? Doesn't it? You're so pretty and I'm going to make you feel pretty."
"N-No."
"You didn't say please. Just be quiet and don't say a word. Be a good boy, you understand?"
"But it hurts."
"It only hurts for a little while."
"N-No."
"Shhh, darling. It's all going to be okay. Oh, God, you're so beautiful."
* * *
"Oh, honey, why'd you cut off your hair? You looked so pretty."
"I don't want to look pretty. I looked like a girl. I don't want to look like a girl. I want to look like a boy! Minä haluan näyttää pojalta!"
---To Be Continued---
The whole story is not told in this way, with nothing but dialogue. Just to let you know. I haven't decided yet, however, if there will be more chapters like this one.
That Finnish sentence there was 'I want to look like a boy'. Thanks again to me lovely translator.
Any thoughts?
Part two goes up after I get reviewed.
I absolutely had to start this story or I was going to go insane. I wrote out four parts already to make sure I wouldn't quit after chapter one, like I tend to do sometimes. I like this idea and hopefully you do as well. I will post the first two parts tonight and the rest tomorrow.
I play this story off of Ville's adrogynous looks. I got a really screwed up idea from it. Do not read this story if you aren't willing to deal with extremely dark subjects and some heavy angst. Also, there are religious discussions through out, although that isn't the main focus as of now.
Title: The Boy Who Looked Like a Girl
Prologue
Rating: R
Warnings: Extremely dark subjects, random religious discussions
Thanks/Dedication: Darling, you didn't give me your name so I don't know how to give you credit, but big thanks to my translator! You know who you are, doll. xoxoxo
AU: Ville's only a year older than Bam. Ville's parents send him to America to go to school.
Summary: His androgynous looks fuel lustful looks and he's grown accostumed to it, but when the annoying boy from his new school gives him a look full of everything but . . . his life becomes even harder to control, to understand.
The Boy Who Looked Like a Girl
Prologue
"You're never going to be normal. You look too pretty, too much like a girl. You look so young for your age, like a piece of art. You're timeless, classic. Beautiful people are never appreciated until they're older. But I appreciate you now. You understand that, right?"
"But . . . I-I'm . . . not s'pposed to."
"But if feels good, doesn't it? Doesn't it? You're so pretty and I'm going to make you feel pretty."
"N-No."
"You didn't say please. Just be quiet and don't say a word. Be a good boy, you understand?"
"But it hurts."
"It only hurts for a little while."
"N-No."
"Shhh, darling. It's all going to be okay. Oh, God, you're so beautiful."
* * *
"Oh, honey, why'd you cut off your hair? You looked so pretty."
"I don't want to look pretty. I looked like a girl. I don't want to look like a girl. I want to look like a boy! Minä haluan näyttää pojalta!"
---To Be Continued---
The whole story is not told in this way, with nothing but dialogue. Just to let you know. I haven't decided yet, however, if there will be more chapters like this one.
That Finnish sentence there was 'I want to look like a boy'. Thanks again to me lovely translator.
Any thoughts?
Part two goes up after I get reviewed.