Closed Door Part 12 by gal8028

[gal8028]

Closed Door
Part 12
By gal8028

sorry took so long but this was an interesting chapter for me to write. i am debating a couple of different story arcs that this could lead to and so far this is where it is right now. more probably this weekend.

A/N: the painting that Ville stops at in the Philadelphia Museum of Art-- The Bath. i've seen it in

Comments

[sweet_666_777]

You made me cry damn it!

When I saw the update I said I'm not going to cry I'm just not going to do it... and then 2 minutes in and I'm bawling my eyes out.

More soon I hope because I love this story so much.

[gal8028]

awwww . . . i'm so glad you like it and i'm sorry to make you all cry. i don't intend to, really.

[alatariel3]

Two things:
First you said: Bam has his dialysis treatment at ten-thirty, it lasts about four hours. Ville has five to eight cigarettes. Chain-smoking eases his nerves. Thing is, chain smoking I can probably smoke at least 5 in one hour. So...? I think it's not really chainsmoking if he's not actually smoking that many. Five to ten isn't actually a lot in four hours.

The other thing; I am now late for class and you are the reason why. I wan't going to be late until I saw that you had updated and now I'm late. And it's worth it, don't think it's not.

[gal8028]

LOL. chainsmoking in hospitals is a killer really--there is usually only one area in which to smoke, and either you have to go halfway across the known universe to get there (which is usually full of people and awful smelling even for someone who is used to smoking) or you get there smoke like 4 and then go back a couple hours later in hopes that it won't be as crowded. LOL. my mom was in and out of the hospital for like a month my junior year of high school and since everyone in my family smoked except for me I learned the routine/tricks really fast.

i'm sorry to make you late to class. i've done that too. been caught up reading something and then gone oh fuck--and sprinted across campus. I'm glad you like it so much that being late is worth it. i try to keep this interesting.

[fear_of_light]

*sniffs* I'm not crying...really! This was such a good chapter.

I cant wait for the next update!

[gal8028]

*hands tissue*

i sawry . . .

[morphine300mg]

That was........... I can't even find the words..........

[gal8028]

yay . . . i love leaving people speechless! :)

[morphine300mg]

That is sooo sweet!! i love this fic! *sheds tear* poor wittle bammie *gives him and ville a hug* more pleae!
Michelle

[morphine300mg]

please* lol i can't spell

[wicked_glamour]

i absolutely loved this...i love this fic to death...i don't always comment and i really should because you have no idea...anyway, more soon please!! pleeeaaase!! *puppy dog eyes* :)

Emily