Hm. Internal Devistation, yo.

[draisk]

Alright. I will warn- I am dreadfully sick, so therefore, my writing, is dreadfully horrible. My mind isn't clear. Lovely. Well, here is another insert of my sucked up writing.

Title: Internal Devistation CH.2
Pairing: Ville/ Bam. MHMM.
Rating: G to NC-17 ( In ze later chaps )
Summary: Hm- I was never good at this. NEVER. Well, lovely Ville has a

Comments

[lots_of_roxz]

Oh I am so sorry that you are sick but rest asure, your writting is wonderful!
Bam in a boat eatting a lollipop...That is going to haunt my dreams from now on

[draisk]

El gaspo! I shall try to get better.. And I think my writing on this sucks because there's a lot of things I want to do, while they're together, and I've been rushing and skipping things to get that to come faster. XD

But thank you alls. ^^;; Taht makes me feel better.

[starshine128]

Ah gorgeous love, you've definatly captured the drunken Ville and Bam amazingly well. I was sick for the entirity of last month I know how you feel hun, cant wait for the next chapter dude..rock on..

[rock_chicka]

lol, Bam in a boat... good stuff!!!
hehe... dats amazing and i love it
get better soon sweetie
*hugz*

[chelsey45036]

aww..i like it!