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Catch

Mar 02, 2007 18:27

Title: Catch
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
POV: Third person
Rating: PG
Length: 500 words
Author's Note: For we_are_cities 01/16/07 prompt
Disclaimer: Fiction ( Read more... )

pete, patrick, fob

Comments 16

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__more March 3 2007, 03:23:44 UTC

Well, thank you kindly!

Also, your icon? Scary and yet so amazing.

lovelyloveleave March 3 2007, 06:29:00 UTC

wow. orpheus and eurydice. you've got me.
that was painful and lovely.
very nice!

__more March 3 2007, 06:51:10 UTC

Thank you, dear!

bestthingaround March 3 2007, 07:00:39 UTC

wow, beautiful. So much story written with so little, but it worked. I think my heart broke when patrick was in pete's bed, clutching one of his shirts. And then their exchange is wonderful and perfect <3

__more March 3 2007, 08:25:07 UTC

Thank you very much. :-)

elessar March 3 2007, 21:12:10 UTC

Oh my. You related Patrick & Peter to one of my favorite myths. LOVE IT.

__more March 4 2007, 04:20:11 UTC

Hahaha, thanks!

patrick_m_gurl March 3 2007, 21:41:59 UTC

that was beautiful.
I relly liked the ending!
good work.
i LUVED it!

__more March 4 2007, 04:20:51 UTC

Many thanks.