Re: just curious...bluanneSeptember 25 2008, 02:42:10 UTC
There were too many voices. It was a diffrent style of writing, where generally you only hear Bella's voice, all of a sudden you have Jacob, Edward +. I thought it was distracting and that the story did not seem as "tight." I also missed "hearing" Bella's point of view, her feelings and I just really liked how her mind worked in the first three books.
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Back to work for me, but thanks! These are some of the best I've seen. Too bad the last book-hem...sucked. That wasn't a pun either.
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Jade//Owlie OvO
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