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____ohgolly

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Sep 05, 2005 22:47

"he found himself out walking again, dragging his feet like he'd done since he was a kid. every three steps, his lace would break out, working it's way through the hole in the sole of his shoe, and every four steps, he went bend down, and tuck the soaking wet offender back into it's little cave. old newspapers were floating around in the gutters ( Read more... )

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sistermorphine_ September 6 2005, 05:50:53 UTC

what is this? is this yours? i love it.

____ohgolly September 6 2005, 12:18:34 UTC

uh, yeah, i guess so. i just thought i'd write something down in my journal and people could wonder about it. and i just started writing.

maybe i should give it a beginning and an end sometime.

sistermorphine_ September 6 2005, 12:22:25 UTC

i think you should indeed. and then you can let me read it. and i can love it some more.

and i don't mean to be a reply comment snoop but you mentioned the great gatsby and you having read it.. i swear (not the cuss kind) that i told you to read that many months ago. i hope i had something to do with that, if only a very small something, because i love passing that book along the line of people i love.

____ohgolly September 6 2005, 12:32:33 UTC

maybe i will. however, i need to think of a name for my character, only known as "he". and after that, it's all plain sailing.

and of course it was to do with you, silly. i've been looking for it forever, and i found a cheap copy, so i got it. and read it, and then read it again. thanks.

is there any way we can communicate right now?

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______superporn September 6 2005, 09:10:18 UTC

ooo, is this the short story you said about?

____ohgolly September 6 2005, 12:19:19 UTC

oh no. that's far too cliched and sappy to go on my elite lj. this is just some depressed schlock i was jotting after reading the great gatsby.

burnmycircuits September 6 2005, 21:27:29 UTC

I might as well just put my pen down forever. I really like this. The attention to detail within the imagery is amazing.
How did the old short story go? You never sent me any of it...

____ohgolly September 7 2005, 17:26:09 UTC

the old short story might well have made way for this new attempt. i might dig it out one day, though. i just wrote some more, if you care to cast an eye over it.

thankyou for the kind words.