Comments | ____impassioned: New Story

____impassioned

Apr 23, 2006 23:57

so, after you read this, tell me your suggestion for a title/your opinion

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laurenornerual April 24 2006, 04:07:13 UTC

i like the first three segments. the stream of consiousness works well. i'll finish it tomorow.

anonymous April 24 2006, 04:20:53 UTC

give me a hard copy and i'll read it, the monitor hurts the eyes to read that much

anonymous April 24 2006, 04:21:17 UTC

I'm ed

____impassioned April 25 2006, 01:02:33 UTC

okay

anonymous April 25 2006, 03:05:23 UTC

nicely done.

maybe title it the eighth circle, adding another circle of hell to dantes seven

____impassioned April 26 2006, 02:45:26 UTC

thanks

and, thats a pretty unique idea

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Re: I couldnt find your email ____impassioned May 1 2006, 00:58:00 UTC

you actually, you did find myemail.

and i responded!

and i was confused!

anonymous May 9 2006, 16:47:47 UTC

Wow...Incredible story, and very well written. Sorry, but I don't have any idea for a title.

____impassioned May 10 2006, 21:10:40 UTC

thanks