A Letter

[____hejira]

As someone who was once remarkably gifted at self sabotage, I understand you better than you'd like to believe. Time has past and we are both very different now. You have a toddler, hair that's too long, and a Quaker sensibility that seems to keep you from the bottom of a bottle. I'm almost married, have slightly more fluff around the middle than

Comments

[unmowngrass]

This is a really, really well written entry! Before I was in the competition, these wistful, semi-autobiographical entries that were a bit scant on actual details, were, unfortunately, the very ones that I mentioned I would sometimes skip over (I'm sorry). Now that I'm in the competition with you, and reading what everyone else comes up with too, I'm actually bowled over at the talent and the sweet, unique voice that you express. Well written, my friend.

[____hejira]

That sweet comment just made my day. I sometimes feel like a bit of a fraud. But I really like the way I write and hope it is unique. I'm not the most vulnerable person but manage to be so when I write. Plus, the cryptic, long sentenced descriptive rambling is exactly the kind of writing I adore reading. Lol. Thanks again, luv. You are a spot of sunshine today.

[sweeny_todd]

very powerful, and almost poetic in the flow.

[basric]

A powerful terribly sad time for both of you. Nice use of prompt.

[notodette]

I really enjoyed this. It captured the prompt in perfect sadness and hope.

[whipchick]

You really create a wistful, pensive mood here.