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Title: Innocence
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,200
Pairing: Lucrecia/Vincent
Summary: Scientists and guns are an interesting mix, and Vincent Valentine is just too soft.
Notes: Because I wanted to write Lucrecia going mad in her own, subtle way. I haven't played DoC, so this may contradict anything other than original game

Comments

[wheatear]

Very good, really creepy. :) Although I always thought Vincent's eyes only turned red after he'd been experimented on?

The writing is excellent, just a couple of typos, like "she though bitterly" (thought).

[xueyie]

From a fic rec. It is great to see how Lucrecia is affected by the experiment and your language really matches the way that she descends into lunacy.