[fanfic] Let it Mean Something 4

Sep 20, 2011 17:34

Fanfiction: Let it Mean Something
Author: 9mm_meg
Characters/Pairings: USUK, a smidge of Canada
Rating: T
Part 4 Word Count: 949
Total Word Count: 3352
Warnings: character death, serious angst, short chapters
Summary: The vehicular manslaughter charge has been wiped from his record, but Alfred can't get over what he's done. His last-ditch effort at ( Read more... )

multipart, usuk, fic, hetalia

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dusmarais September 21 2011, 02:13:27 UTC
I don't even remember if I ever commented on this story but I must have right?? I'll try to fix that if I didn't.

Oh geez, this is a sad fic but I was happy when reading this chapter. I like the idea of Alfred getting to know Arthur through his diary.

Oh France! Oh France!

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9mm_meg September 21 2011, 21:37:09 UTC
Well, I appreciate the comment regardless of when I get it... haha.

Expect more of the bittersweet... It's unavoidable with this one.

Thanks! <3

Ha. Francis. He'll have a couple more cameos before the end ^_^

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kasumicc September 21 2011, 02:14:17 UTC
I like how this chapter has a different mood than the previous ones, and how Alfred is actually enjoying to be reading the diary! As for Matthew, his appearances are always priceless xD

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9mm_meg September 21 2011, 21:40:04 UTC
Yep, we'll start seeing the mood change along with Al as he progresses through Arthur's diary. And oh Mattie. I love him so. Haha.

Thanks! <3

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9mm_meg September 21 2011, 21:43:16 UTC
Thanks! It's always a little odd trying to convey a character if they don't get any real screen-time, so I'm glad they get the job done. ^_^

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j_sasunaru_c September 21 2011, 07:55:39 UTC
I want to sob my heart out for the past chapters, and since I've only read the latest one here, I'll say this:

I love the plot. To whoever gave this prompt in kinkmeme, I give her All The Awards. This is so unique and heartwarming at the same time, soul shattering. I seriously love angst and this, this gives off that foreboding, impending doom right from the start. Yet now the tone of the story becomes mellow, allowing Alfred to know Arthur. Too bad they really haven't met.

Oh dear, good thing Arthur decided to pursue his diary!

And yeah, sorry for the wall of text but I just want to tell you how much I adore this story. Seriously.

Thank you for writing!

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9mm_meg September 21 2011, 21:48:17 UTC
No worries! I love walls of text XD

Ikr?! My OP was fantastic. This request grabbed me the instant I found it, and next thing I knew, it was 6 in the morning, and I had the whole rough first draft done. That never happens to me. So yes. OP deserves All The Awards and more. I never could've come up with this on my own.

I'm so glad you like it <3 And thanks for reading!

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ren_chan146 September 21 2011, 18:32:20 UTC
This diary is really cute. Too bad the chapter was so short. I would have loved to read more.^^

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9mm_meg September 21 2011, 21:49:23 UTC
Yeah, I know my chapters are short ^_^;; But there'll be more of Arthur's journal ahead, so don't worry!

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