You make me feel like dancing...

[9_things]

Title: You make me feel like dancing
Prompt: None, this now strays away from the Firefly 100
Characters/Pairings: River, Jayne, pre-rayne. Rating: PG
Wordcount: 500,
Disclaimer: Not mine, not paid, don't sue.
Notes: There is now a definite sequence Keep, Caught, Dropping hints, Lost and Found, Bargain and Waking Up come first in that order. This

Comments

[tinadoll]

OH MY!

What!

WHAT?!

..oh my oh my

Unexpected....Which is good!@

[9_things]

I'm always glad to be unexpected. Thanks :D

[sunshineali]

Poor River! what is she doing?

Jayne will have to fix her all up and take care of that wounded foot for her. I always like it when Jayne watches her dance. Not sure why...

Can't wait to read more.

:)Ali

[9_things]

All will shortly be revealed. :D Thanks

[crazywriterchic]

Yay! I helped!

I like this very much, and I can't wait to see what she felt she needed to atone for.

[9_things]

You did, BIG TIME. There will be one more fairy tale that won't explain much and an epilogue that I hope will explain it all. Thanks :D

[fabledfigment]

Huh.

Atoning for trapping him into an engagement he doesn't realize is there?

At least now he can nurse her... oh, and carry her while she recovers...

[9_things]

I'm just going to grin at you. *Grins*

[theneis]

I'm glad you're continuing with this. Honestly, it's the best one yet. You've built up the tension quite nicely.

[9_things]

One more to go plus an epilogue. Thanks :D

[theneis]

Yay! Can't wait.