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9_things

Caught...

Feb 05, 2008 08:53

Title: Caught
Prompt: Caught for the firefly 100
Characters/Pairings: River, Jayne, Pre Rayne if you like or River could just be yanking Jayne's chain
Word count: 200
Rating: U
Disclaimer: Not mine, don't sue, potless.
Summary: Jayne catches River doing something screwy.
Notes: This loosly follows on from Keep, a fairy tale theme is developing, this ( Read more... )

series, fairy tales, firefly 100, pre-rayne, river tam, u, drabble, jayne cobb

Comments 22

theneis February 5 2008, 09:23:07 UTC

awww. That's ONE way to get the man's shirt off. ;)

9_things February 6 2008, 13:11:35 UTC

:D Bless 'im.

guinny_hamilton February 5 2008, 14:25:39 UTC

Aaaaahaaahahahahahahahaha!

Hehehehe! *chokes*

And the worst part is, it really seems like something River would do if she had a crush on Jayne!

9_things February 6 2008, 13:12:06 UTC

:D *hugs you*

open_embrace February 6 2008, 07:32:14 UTC

*chockes on giggles*

so cute! and its interesting, because you dont know (and neither does Jayne) whether she said it because she knew he was watching, or if she was being cute and daydreaming about him without knowing he was there.

and seriously gorgeous imagery :P

9_things February 6 2008, 13:13:02 UTC

Thank you :D I do like to leave things a little ambiguous, it's more fun.

cmk418 February 6 2008, 14:01:39 UTC

Incredibly sweet. And I love the "Sleeping Beauty" theme (it's my favorite Disney film) so I could totally see River going through the scene here.

And Jayne was so cute, watching her.

matchlightfire February 6 2008, 18:26:12 UTC

HEEEheeheehee...I love the detail of River not being able to sing! Love Jayne's description;) Love him choking on his laughter and shirt!