1: On the Bed

[mortar]

Title: The Leopard, Lion, and She Wolf (explicit)
Author: roxiezeke
Prompt: 1: On the Bed
Wordcount: 691
Author Notes: Dante as in the Dante from The Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri not Dante from the Devil May Cry series.

Comments

[sunshine_melodi]

So angsty and wonderful at the same time. 8D

*hugs Yama*

I really liked how you portrayed him. Very lovely. ^______^

[mortar]

I tried to do it massively in chara. I mean, if we face it they'd both have major issues with falling in love, period. And I doubt that either of them would actually act on it because they just don't have the time.

Thank you so much for the comment! Makes me happy!

[sunshine_melodi]

That is so true. 8D

You did such a wonderful job. ^______^

Haha. You're very welcome. ;D

[hitsuushi]

Oh god, I love you even more now XD
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Once again your wording was simply splendid!!

[mortar]

MASSIVE HEART ATTACK. MY HEARTS GOING A LITTLE SPAZTASTIC AND I THINK IT'S A LITTLE UNHEALTHY. BUT IT'S A GOOD FEELING.

COULD THIS BE LOVE?

[hitsuushi]

IT IS!!!

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[mortar]

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*blows bubbles*

[cruzle]

Oh my God, good job. <3 I feel bad for poor Yamamoto! Well written. I like when I can feel a bit sad, I guess. Yamamoto laughs too much in fics sometimes, you know? This is realistic. I approve. <3 Nice work.

[mortar]

Thank you so much! I tried to do something like, really realistic and I'm glad you approve!

[ahja_reyn]

Awwwww! That last line was so sad :(

[mortar]

lol so sad. I was in a sad mood when writing this.

Thanks for the comment <3

[tyreling]

Very sad, bittersweet and really beautifully written. I love how Yamamoto is more resigned here instead of cluelessly happy/energetic. I love your take on this theme, very different, very emotional and overall amazing. good job!

[mortar]

Oh my gosh! Thank you! You're such a sweeties. The comment was so nice to read.

I don't think Yamamoto is half as clueless as me makes himself out to be.