Ficlet: Good Example (James, Sirius), Adult

[800wordsmod]

Title: Good Example
Author: florahart
Characters: James, Sirius
Summary: James has something to tell Sirius.
Rating: Adult, though there is no explicit smut
Warnings: James/Sirius, James/Lily, James/Lily/Sirius, so you do the math.
Notes: This is almost certainly snegurochka_lee 's fault, which is why I made her do a quickie beta, but since Jo is writing Marauders-era,

Comments

[mindabbles]

Loved the dialogue. This was a wonderful mix of funny and bittersweet. Well done!

[florahart]

Thanks. :)

[sambethe]

I love how twisted and complicated you've made all the relationships here, even those that are off page.

And yay! for Lee's bad influence. :)

[florahart]

Thanks!

[cho_malfoy]

Ha, I loved the banter. Very nicely done.

[florahart]

Thanks. I had fun getting this to work in 800 words.

[innerslytherin]

Oh wow HOT. Just. I love the dialogue, it's so full of stops and starts and utterly perfect. And the way you portray such complex relationships with so few words. It's great!

[florahart]

:D Thanks. Getting it to stay in 800 words was fun.

[florahart]

:) Thanks.