Ficlet: The Precipice (James, Lily, Harry, Sirius, Other), G

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Title: The Precipice
Author: joanwilder
Characters: James, Lily, Harry, Sirius, Other Canon Character
Summary: You wish that some things could've stayed the same.
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: The Harry Potter universe belongs to J.K. Rowling and her book and film companies. Thanks to my beta for the read-through.

Comments

[sambethe]

If you're honest, though, you'll have to admit that things just aren't the same. Despite the changes the baby brought, there are other things that have got in the way…weightier things…darker things.

I quite liked that line.

Enjoyed!

[joanwilder]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

[mancrave]

ohh I really liked this, want to save Peter from himself though. great last line.

[joanwilder]

I've always wondered what went through his noggin.

[secretsolitaire]

Oh, Peter. :-(

[joanwilder]

Yeah, my thoughts exactly.

[opheliet]

Nooo! Oh this was wonderful but so heartbreaking. I could sense it coming the whole time, there was such a tense atmosphere present throughout the whole piece, sort of like a train wreck you have to watch. Fantastic job!

[joanwilder]

Yeah, I've always thought that Peter got swept up into something too big for him. And being weak and unused to standing on his own, he caved.

[celandineb]

I liked how you managed to make it ambiguous whether it was Peter or Remus up until the end. Cleverly done.

[joanwilder]

That was my plan. :) Thanks for reading!