DBSK - A Work of Heart [YunhoxJaejoong] PART TWO

[7writing]

Title: A Work of Heart (part 2/3)
Pairing: Yunho x Jaejoong, ?? x ??
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst, Drama, insanity?
Summary: Loss paves a path to love and insanity.
Notes: Written for the JaeHo fanfic contest. Won first place. Don't ask me how. Last chapter will be posted soon.
Warning: Character death.

Comments

[mickey8]

my heart and throat felt so tight it hurts. and i only realize it when the last word was read... that i, am holding back the tears.

though YooChun's death is a past tense and i think in this chapter, you're moving to spell the YunJae's emotional bounds... it has not run far from the first part, the heavy feeling still lingers like it wouldn't let me go. i guess, this is how the four feels on YooChun's death. they move on (though rather slowly) but the feeling for YooChun will always be there.

i love their progress. the four as an entity and also YunJae as the couple.

♥

[mickey8]

though nobody (i hope) will wish for this to be the reality... but i have to admit, it was written very... absolutely. reality wise... it depends on what you believe on. well, things like that do happen (sadly so).

[moon1084]

ok you basically said everything i wanted too! this is soo like bittersweet

[bunni_chan]

There's nothing else to say.
Mickey8 has said exactly how I feel.
Only, I let out the tears...

[bunni_chan]

I should really friend you XDDD~
I adore your fics~
I'll be looking forward to that <3

[kwannie_ritsu]

To be honest, mickey8 simply wrote down everything I wanted to say already.
I was literally crying reading this part.
Not only because it was just sad, but also because it was touching...(sorry,
I just can't think of better words T-T)

Again, well-written.

[heartoffire03]

one word:

BREATHTAKING

[steffiluvlife]

my heart my throat my every being was constricting..
oxygen flow is so uneven...i dunno if im choking on my tears
the saltiness in my mouth seems bitter

all these just came out from reading these past 2 parts
i loved the way you can push out all the feelings my dear
how yoochunnie adored joongie
and how this entire ordeal is pushing yunjae together

i seriously cannot imagine or visualise if all this is real
you have seriously prodded on the one true fear of every fan
that is them separating...
gah!! made me cry:(
but seriously: it deserved the first prize!