Bourne From Hate, .I

[7daywar]

Comments

[holdmestill]

A very interesting plot and I like your writing. Your warning is freaking me out though... I'm not a fan of character death... So I'm hoping it won't be either YooSu or YunJae.

Please.

[7daywar]

thank you very much! um, i'm not sure who i'm going to have die, but i don't think you have to worry about those two couples unless the plot decides to change up on me.

[holdmestill]

OMG YES. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T CHANGE THE PLOT XD

[7daywar]

i will do my best, but i don't think i could kill them off even if the plot asked for it!

[kibathepenguin]

Loved this! I definitely encourage you to continue; the plot is really interesting!

[7daywar]

thank you very much, this fic has taken hold of me, really!

[shinchul303]

Following.

This is different. YOU are different.

[7daywar]

oh? why thank you, different is good. thanks for reading this chapter!

[awshin]

No offence. I am just commenting but you can ignore me. Haha! Does your summary have to be so long? I mean, do a proper summary? This "this is a long summary so i'm going to try and condense the plot of this a bit and just give you all the gist of it. it's sort of like a cliche twist on the cop drama, though i'm not sure if it's cliche or not, i mean it is a cop drama," is unneccesary, in a summary. You can write this in author's note though.

Anyway, plot seems interesting! Be confident of your work! Update soon. =)

[7daywar]

lol. i'll skim that out the next time i post, i just didn't want anyone to be too confused, even though i describe the drug in great detail, i was worried that people were still going to wonder what the hell was going on and what the story was about. no worries, i can take criticism and thank you!

[awshin]

Is what i said even considered criticism? Haha! I'm just highlighting... okay, i think it can be considered constructive criticism. lol. I just thought that isn't suppose to be under summary but should be under author's note. You can ignore my suggestion if you feel comfortable with how it is now! =)

[7daywar]

any suggestions are helpful. lol. i'm pretty easy going, so it doesn't matter. whatever helps me evolve as a write is fair game. i thought it was a bit long myself, i'll keep it like this for my journal but i'll cut out the excess during future postings on the comms.

[sol_valerie]

yes. this fic definitely sounds promising. for that, i'm on the following list too. looking forward to the next update ^^

[7daywar]

thank you thank you thank you!