I totally applaud your characterisation...I totally agree that few D/s fics do the characters justice. But you were right on target! Plus I am totally a fan of porn with plot...so thanks! Great Job!
This is an excellent fic. I really appreciate the ends to which you went to make the knifeplay not about SEX or SUBMISSION or anything, but instead a really touching display of love and need and trust. Plus, you know, scorching hot. And the case was prime! Well done, all together.
I honestly can't even remember where I found a link to this story, but I was completely blown away. I think that you accomplished everything you intended to do, and managed to do all of that in a seamless narrative that had me wide-eyed and breathless.
Keep in mind that I usually avoid blood/knifeplay, although I am very glad that I didn't let that warning stop me from reading this. Because I don't know what I was expecting, but this was absolutely beautiful. The story, the characterization, the boys' interactions with each other -- it was perfect, and I really found myself kind of in awe of how you managed to depict their love for each other without having to say it.
So thank you for writing it, and for you long (but not pretentious) afterword.
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Keep in mind that I usually avoid blood/knifeplay, although I am very glad that I didn't let that warning stop me from reading this. Because I don't know what I was expecting, but this was absolutely beautiful. The story, the characterization, the boys' interactions with each other -- it was perfect, and I really found myself kind of in awe of how you managed to depict their love for each other without having to say it.
So thank you for writing it, and for you long (but not pretentious) afterword.
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