Comments | 7_chakras: Is (Suki, D, Light, 1)

karma_kalisutah in 7_chakras

Is (Suki, D, Light, 1)

Mar 21, 2008 15:23

Title: Is
Author: karma_kalisutah
Claim: Suki
Challenge: Duality
Chakra: Light
Prompt: 1. Insight
Warnings: Could be interpreted as femslash, but that would be missing the point. Allusion to one of the not-so-nice things that happened in "Separation"
Author's Note: Sequel to "Separation".

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Comments 5

pseudo_tsuga March 22 2008, 04:16:57 UTC

It's a shame this hasn't gotten more comments because this is a wonderful piece. It's lyrical and understated, which I love. Good job!

karma_kalisutah March 22 2008, 06:59:32 UTC

Why thank you. ^_^ I just posted it today, so hopefully it will get more hits eventually.

tunxeh March 23 2008, 22:45:58 UTC

Interesting piece. I like the way you use the title word in the sequences where what Suki thinks she's seeing keeps changing; it adds to the feel of being in a dream, but also fits with the multiple aspects of things in the spirit world.

shes_unreal March 24 2008, 14:59:30 UTC

Really beautiful, I love it.

opal_skies June 6 2008, 05:33:16 UTC

This, my dear, was gold. The way you meld the words and grammar and bend them to your own way, which seems so entirely right as you use it in this piece, kind of reminds me of William Faulkner's writing.
It's gorgeous. The writing was dream-like, too, and almost stream-of-conciousness-esque, which works really well for a dream. The ending, especially, was beautiful. Great job! :D (and sorry for coming off like...an English teacher? Or just a weirdo, which, alas, I fully admit to being! :P)