Title: Miss You
Author: althea /
79_percentRating: PG-13
Pairing: ShiHan
Form: One-shot
Fandom: Super Junior
Genre: Angst
Lyrics: The Moffatts' Miss You Like Crazy.
Misc Notes: I haven't been writing for months, so I feel really unsure with this piece. But I just had to make this contribution because this comm had fed me with all the SuJu goodies when I
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bravo, my dear~~ <3 i loved it T_T it really rather hurt toward the end T_T
Why does it feel like we lost two people when only one had gone
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Thank you for reading. Glad you liked it.
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*hides*
I didn't know why I separated them too. ><;;
thanks for reading. ((:
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i'm a rabid shihan fanatic, so i devoured this, but GAAAAAHHH WHERE IS THE HAPPY ENDING?!?! ||should not speak because all her fics are emo||
It had been a year...
that last sentence hurt. and I feel bad for heechul and kibum. at first i was worried that it would be a death fic, and then i would be reduced to a quivering, tearful mess. But then it wasn't, and lookit, i'm still quite a mess.
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At first I did want to make HanKyung die, but I didn't want to put it so explicitly, so I left it like this, so those reading can derive their own conclusion (if HanKyung is dead or if he just left ShiWon).
I'm sorry there isn't a happy end. I don't know why my first shihan is an angst like this. *digs a hole and hides* Thanks for reading tho'. ^^
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I'm glad you didn't make Hannie die outright. that would have just been too sad. T_T
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*agrees* I can't bring myself to be so cruel to Shihan. T__T
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But no.
Depression.
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Thank you for reading! ((:
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Oh, that's so painful. T___T Poor Shiwonnie, waiting for someone who's gone.
I liked the way you characterized him in this. I'm so used to other Suju fic writers portraying him as calm, rather mature, but I see him just the way you portrayed him: child-like and a bit naive and pouty and BEAR-HUGGING. =X
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lol~ I remember you of course! I read some of your SuJu works but just haven't been able to reply. ^^ I normally see Shiwon as the calm, composed and mature boy, but after watching him hug that bear in Miracle MV and Mystery 6, I can't help but picture him like this.
I deliberately didn't state if HanKyung died or if he just left, because I want to give more room for imagination. I don't know if it made sense tho' ^^;
Thanks for reading!
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Yeah, after watching him pout and cling to that bear in Miracle, any mature image of him was completely shattered.
I figured. I like it ambiguous, each reader can interpret. But I still say he died. XD;
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