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Nov 27, 2011 21:02

Title: Panicked, part 16
Pairing: Eventual Arthur/Eames
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, memory loss, and deals with non-con
Summary: Eames is kidnapped in Mombasa and only starts to remember what happened after seeing Arthur a few weeks later… (Based off of this prompt from the inceptionkink meme).
Word Count: Around 5,600
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just_jane_doe November 28 2011, 03:31:08 UTC
Wow, it's been forever since I read the last part of this fic - went back and caught up a bit and yes - just as heartbreaking as I remembered it. Still, this chapter has so much hope in it - I'm really crossing my fingers that there's something salvagable for Eames and Arthur both after Eames comes back to himself. Worth the wait, definately - hope there's more soon!

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78revolutions December 5 2011, 23:52:54 UTC
Sorry for so long between updates! I am about to post another part, so hopefully the long waits are over (especially as there is only one more part to update after this one!). Thank you so much for still reading and for the comments. I hope you like the end! <3

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panicked 16 laceymcbain November 28 2011, 05:23:05 UTC
I had to go back and reread the last couple of parts, but this section seems to be moving them in the right direction. Poor Eames! And Arthur's trying so hard to give him space and time and yet he feels as if he can't do anything right by Eames. Oh, boys!

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Re: panicked 16 78revolutions December 5 2011, 23:53:10 UTC
Thank you for the comment! Sorry again for such a long wait between them. <3

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black_betty_26 November 28 2011, 18:11:51 UTC
oh god...I was actually JUST thinking about this fic, and hoping (for the hundredth time) that it would be updated, and BAMN!! THere you were!!! And...I wanted it so badly, and yet it was sooooo sad and now I just want MORE ( ... )

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78revolutions December 5 2011, 23:54:23 UTC
More is coming - I am off after this to upload another part. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I hope the next part fits your expectations (especially when it comes to Arthur spelling it out to Eames...).

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beanarie November 28 2011, 19:20:49 UTC
I love how nothing is ever easy in this story. Even when the last chapter ended on a note of hope (Arthur's got you now, it's going to be okay), Eames is still defensive and prickly and resistant and totally in denial. It was really satisfying how Arthur finally broke him down a little, making him realize that he's being a dick to people who genuinely care about him, and they started to compromise.

Do you have this in Word? I'd love to be able to read the whole thing all together when it's done.

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78revolutions December 5 2011, 23:56:50 UTC
I wanted to make this story as realistic as possible (and I admit that its been surprisingly very cathartic to me), and - in my experience - after any event like this, things aren't easy. So I'm glad that is coming off to people and hopefully seems realistic. Which is to say - thank you very much for the comment. :)

I do have this in word. I'm about to upload the second to last part, but I'm hoping that when I finish the epilogue (Which I am about to send to my beta, gulp) I'll be able to post it somewhere in its full form. Or I could send it to you, if you like? Its turned into quiiiite a long fic!

Thank you again for the comment. <3

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krytella November 29 2011, 00:45:18 UTC
Love how completely, realistically confused Eames is in this part. It's a long road but looks like he's finally ready to accept some help...

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78revolutions December 5 2011, 23:59:12 UTC
Thanks so much for reading, and I really appreciate you calling his reaction realistic. Thank you. <3

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