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[616poisongirl]

So here is my secret Santa fic, I have an idea who this fic is for, but I cant be certain.......anyway I really hope she likes it and so do all of you

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O___O

[meeshimish]

This story was incredible! I love Dr. Dashing and his back story of the serum and it being like a Dr,Jerkyl/Mr. Hyde kind of thing. And I loved hero Randy, The Viper, PERFECT XD I loved so much of this fic but I only took out a few things so I didn't go overboard and leave a massive comment....

Trailing a hand down his stomach, bouncing it over his cut abs he groaned. This had become a bit of a ritual for him, admiring himself like this in his suit. ~ *wibble*

“Just let it go” Randy whispered when he broke the kiss “yes it’s fucked up, and no, I have no idea what’s going on or what it going to happen.......but please, for me, just let me have you right now” --- <3333 unf! God I love villian Cody and hero Randy!

“I want to feel you for a week Randy......please just take me, have me, if only for tonight”---No words <3333333

But Dr Dashing and The Viper, well that was a whole different story, up here on the roof tops of the city they could be whatever they wanted to be, up here they could be together forever.---- <3 <3 perfect

Re: O___O

[616poisongirl]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I was really worried about this fic because I never write AU, I find it so hard to distance them from their real life characters, but I had a lot of fun writing this :D

I dont know too much about super heros so I just went with what I knew and hoped it turned out ok lol.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it *beams* :D

[novicewealth]

Oh damn, that was great AU fic. The concept is really awesome. I like the background that you did for Cody/Dr. Dashing, because I sympathized with someone who didn't mean to be bad, but wanted revenge for the pain and misery. (Poor Coddles). Then Dr. Dashing would be the one who is fed up with people taking advantage, ridiculing, and being unappreciative of him in the city where he is a valuable asset. The Viper would be like a Bruce Wayne/Multibillionaire; a mysterious, stoic type, yet he has this amazing power of discerning true feelings like Cody's. I won't specifically quote the Samantha portions, but you made me dislike her in this fic for having a big hand in creating the "villain" that is Dr. Dashing.

Dr Dashing stepped from the shadows his eyes glowing light blue with rage, he balled his fists up and flexed his muscles as he slowly moved towards The Viper, each step smooth and calculated. I could imagine the show down and it's so sexy because they have no idea who either one true identity is, and they stalking after each

[616poisongirl]

Thank you so much......I really had no idea what I was doing with this fic. I never write AU and I had never even considered super hero/villain fic before so I was pretty worried that it wouldn't be any good!
I knew I wanted Randy to be very batman like, he just screams that to me and I really didn't want Cody to be all evil so that Randy could truly fall in love with him.

I have never written a fight seen so it was all totally new to me, I hope it came off ok, because I was just winging it really lol, but I guess they fight all the time in the ring so it was easy to envisage :D

I wanted the sex to be really frantic, they both know it shouldnt be happening, but they just cant help themselves.

oh yeah, you just know they were at it all the time after that, all over the city :D <333333

Merry Christmas to you too hun! :D

[novicewealth]

It's funny because my friend and I were talking about how Randy was portrayed as an anti-hero of WWE, so he would be The Viper lol. Then the complexities of Dr. Dashing/Cody where mankind drove him to this. It kinda reminds me of Catwoman and Batman's relationship. They have romantic entanglements, but Selina isn't totally evil, but goes by her own moral code.
(Oh goodness, I wonder how Randy and Cody act when they encounter each other now out of costume especially at socials for the elite.)
Yes, Dr. Dashing luring him to rooftops is the hottest thing because their sex was so raw and gawwww. O_O

[616poisongirl]

COdy would work very well as a kind of Catwoman character, crazy and seductive, but relatively normal in their regular lives. I see them always being a bit on edge whenever they see each other normally, partly because they're terrified they cant keep it up and partly because they want to be together in real life too so much. I guess there would be a lot of hushed whispers and touches.

[616poisongirl]

hehehehehehehee awesome!!!! I'm glad you liked it bb.....I had no clue what I was doing ;D

[xenasoul]

Oh hun if only superhero movies were like this they would be so much better!!! lol
I loved how twisted Cody is and I'm happy they will still have their moments together when wearing their suits.
Thanks for writing this! ♥

[616poisongirl]

heheheheeh ikr?? Damn that would be a hot movie!! :D

I love the thought of crazy Cody and of course it couldnt be the end of them, they're made for each other! :D

I'm glad you liked it hun! :D

[scoobyatemysnax]

for a nerd like me, i swear, this is my nirvana ♥

[616poisongirl]

heheheheheh well thats why I thought this was yours!! lol.
I hope you like it, I dont really know what I'm doing with all the super hero stuff, but I had a great time writing it :D