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great_whatsit July 25 2012, 20:12:46 UTC
I really like the patience and easy rhythm of this -- it feels like you're just letting things develop naturally, on their own. And the inside of Stewart's head is an interesting thing to be, he's so refreshingly honest with himself, even when he doesn't think he's being so.

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hoppipolla July 25 2012, 21:36:52 UTC
Okay first off *squee* because Liverpool and they don't get enough love outside of the usual people. So this was great and tender and a nice, happy story without much sadness and just really sweet. I like it a lot :)

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hoppipolla July 28 2012, 21:01:43 UTC
Exactly, hope to see more pairings in the slash world. Aww and no honor I just love giving good feedback with the fic and author deserve it <3

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thelastfig July 26 2012, 15:42:42 UTC
I like how starkly honest you've written Stewart, and that he is aware of his own faults and pushes himself to do better. Setting this over the course of many years instead of just one lets us see his evolution as both a player and a person and I really enjoyed that. His exchanges with Jordan are slow and sweet and I love that last line. Definitely made me smile :3 Good job!

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cheryl_bites July 28 2012, 12:42:56 UTC
Don't know the players, but you've done a good job of establishing how depressing it must be to be good enough and no better. Brrr.

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