awwwwwwwwww <33333333 you know how much i loved already the draft, but this... awww! &hearts love the 0.33 seconds, the initiation, poor kun, mauro (which one, camoranesi?), floor and guilt, el chino heinze!!!, gonzalo's lustful lack of hesitation (allllliteration intended? &hearts)... my favourite scene is also even yummier now. and everything i already told you about. and many things i didn't mention but squeed about. this is awesome, love:* &hearts *hugs*
I love this. I love the structure of it. I love how it turned out. I love you for Micho's backstory. I think this is a brilliant AU setting and you've done it so well. It was so believable. Yes, i can picture them as firemen. I adore Falcao. I didn't know much about him but you've written him like such a loveable character. That relationship develops so truely and so perfectly. The little argentine or football related details were brilliantly added. That you've made Boca and River's stadium to firehouses was a superb plot and that you've managed to add this wonderful relationship to this detailed sort of Alternate Universe shows your grand talent. Thank you for having such a vivid imagination. (Also loved the newpaper clippings. such a great idea)
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you know how much i loved already the draft, but this... awww! &hearts
love the 0.33 seconds, the initiation, poor kun, mauro (which one, camoranesi?), floor and guilt, el chino heinze!!!, gonzalo's lustful lack of hesitation (allllliteration intended? &hearts)... my favourite scene is also even yummier now. and everything i already told you about. and many things i didn't mention but squeed about. this is awesome, love:* &hearts
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