Oh, you. All that fretting about failing. I could bash you about the head, Conny. This is amazing. You manage to say so much, while leaving so much unsaid (and yet still really obvious, if that even makes sense, I totally suck at reviewing). It's all ouch-y in a nice way; and I'd say you managed to keep Rino under control very successfully. :p Thank you.
Thank you so much, Ruby. *hugs a lot* This has given me the most trouble of all CF fics yet - they are pushing me back into the arms of the French, do they really want that? *g* And keeping Rino under control was done by cutting 400 words of him. I fear he will never speak to me again, to be quite honest.
Oh, my goodness. I needed this like I needed air. I love the way this pans out. Andrea PoV is probably the WORST THING to do, but you've tricked out such a lovely voice for him here, and I love that your style is so restrained and matter-of-fact in spite of the bunch of messy emotions tearing through this. It's really nicely resolved, and a lot of that is because this is the greatest Rino ever. And that DDR is still DDR, confusing and a little crazy and totally adorable all through. Lovely.
Thank you! I am really glad it works for you because the fretting I did over this one was bigger than the fretting over my previous CF fics, and that's saying a lot. *g*
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