I LOVED IT. ADORED IT. LOVED IT. Did I say I loved it already?
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I have to say, though, that I'm a bit disappointed that "nothing" happened between them when Pep was the coach. I mean, I can see the specialness and the uniqueness and the GORGEOUS little moments of last season that you've so beautifully described for us... but compared to the earlier parts I felt like a sadness lingering... I'm not sure if the sadness was there in the story or if it was me reading it with a hint of regret. It's very Pep, I guess, to stay focused during the season... I just wish.. ahh, never mind. It's a different way to see them, and it worked out.
Pep smiles and lets his hand curl over the back of Andrés' neck before moving to ruffle his hair kdjalkdjdkjljd, totally made me die.
I like how it was, in a way, Pep that "seduced" him, Pep who took him out to dinner, then kissed him, then (later) brought him to his place and sexed him.
Pep pull him into an awkward half hug and there are suddenly lips pressed against the corner of his mouth and
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Thank you SO MUCH. I love getting feedback like this.
I had originally planned to include more intimate scenes but I decided that even if they are happening, I guess I wanted more of the focus to be on them as maybe something more (if that makes sense. )
In my mind, Pep didn't bring anyone else to the apartment. There have definitely been others for both of them, and they probably both know that so there will always be a bit of jealousy.
I like this description of their relationship. A lot. It's interesting. I liked this bit myself, mostly because to me, sex isn't something that always matters to them. It's about being friends and being on the same team again and all sorts of others things rather then always sleeping together. Which is what makes it special to them.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
a) Aww, I was nervous for Andres when he had to ask Pep for a ride home. b) Pep is only dressed from the waist down *_* c) He looks at Xavi who nods and he nods back Awww, Xavi is always there! ♥ d) Aww, Andres blushes so often...and it's probably really visible on his white skin :) e) Andrés wondered when it was he become an idol wow, I just love how you've repeated this theme, and made him grow up :) f) Hee =) g) the younger ones have been treated to dinner to make them feel more at home But when Pep took Andres out, it was more than that, right? *g* h)on that night it was meant to be *content sigh* I remember that moment, I was at school, watching it with a few others, and everyone else stared at us when we yelled after the goal =D i) He of course is content with his bottle of water He stays sober even in the midst of everyone else? *clutches heart* For real
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c.) I feel like Xavi is probably someone who would be there through a lot and be the one to sort of take over making sure Andres is okay. d.) Exactly. Anytime he's put in the spotlight he gets so shy and reserved, I can only imagine that he blushes quite easily. e.) thank you! I sort of didn't notice that I had managed to repeat the theme until I had looked over the story. It's so true, especially if you think about Andres idolizing Pep and then Cesc ended up idolizing Andres. f.) that's probably my favorite picture of them, for the sheer simplicity of it. g.) Yes *g* Pep may be friendly towards everyone, Andres is different and special. i.) I don't know for sure. I watched part of the parade and the only drink I saw in his hand was a water bottle. Though I'm sure he had a bit of champagne eventually. j.) Thank you again. I am so proud of this story and it's something I put a lot of time and effort into so it means a lot to have such a wonderful comment and to know other people like it.
c)That really fit! I could really see Xavi doing that! :) g) B/c they have a long history together :) i)he had a bit of champagne eventually. Peer (or not!) pressure! *shakes head*
j) You should be proud! There were so many things I wanted to point out, but these were my favorites :)
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I have to say, though, that I'm a bit disappointed that "nothing" happened between them when Pep was the coach. I mean, I can see the specialness and the uniqueness and the GORGEOUS little moments of last season that you've so beautifully described for us... but compared to the earlier parts I felt like a sadness lingering... I'm not sure if the sadness was there in the story or if it was me reading it with a hint of regret.
It's very Pep, I guess, to stay focused during the season... I just wish.. ahh, never mind. It's a different way to see them, and it worked out.
Pep smiles and lets his hand curl over the back of Andrés' neck before moving to ruffle his hair
kdjalkdjdkjljd, totally made me die.
I like how it was, in a way, Pep that "seduced" him, Pep who took him out to dinner, then kissed him, then (later) brought him to his place and sexed him.
Pep pull him into an awkward half hug and there are suddenly lips pressed against the corner of his mouth and ( ... )
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I had originally planned to include more intimate scenes but I decided that even if they are happening, I guess I wanted more of the focus to be on them as maybe something more (if that makes sense. )
In my mind, Pep didn't bring anyone else to the apartment. There have definitely been others for both of them, and they probably both know that so there will always be a bit of jealousy.
I like this description of their relationship. A lot. It's interesting. I liked this bit myself, mostly because to me, sex isn't something that always matters to them. It's about being friends and being on the same team again and all sorts of others things rather then always sleeping together. Which is what makes it special to them.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
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a) Aww, I was nervous for Andres when he had to ask Pep for a ride home.
b) Pep is only dressed from the waist down *_*
c) He looks at Xavi who nods and he nods back Awww, Xavi is always there! ♥
d) Aww, Andres blushes so often...and it's probably really visible on his white skin :)
e) Andrés wondered when it was he become an idol wow, I just love how you've repeated this theme, and made him grow up :)
f) Hee =)
g) the younger ones have been treated to dinner to make them feel more at home But when Pep took Andres out, it was more than that, right? *g*
h)on that night it was meant to be *content sigh* I remember that moment, I was at school, watching it with a few others, and everyone else stared at us when we yelled after the goal =D
i) He of course is content with his bottle of water He stays sober even in the midst of everyone else? *clutches heart* For real ( ... )
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c.) I feel like Xavi is probably someone who would be there through a lot and be the one to sort of take over making sure Andres is okay.
d.) Exactly. Anytime he's put in the spotlight he gets so shy and reserved, I can only imagine that he blushes quite easily.
e.) thank you! I sort of didn't notice that I had managed to repeat the theme until I had looked over the story. It's so true, especially if you think about Andres idolizing Pep and then Cesc ended up idolizing Andres.
f.) that's probably my favorite picture of them, for the sheer simplicity of it.
g.) Yes *g* Pep may be friendly towards everyone, Andres is different and special.
i.) I don't know for sure. I watched part of the parade and the only drink I saw in his hand was a water bottle. Though I'm sure he had a bit of champagne eventually.
j.) Thank you again. I am so proud of this story and it's something I put a lot of time and effort into so it means a lot to have such a wonderful comment and to know other people like it.
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c)That really fit! I could really see Xavi doing that! :)
g) B/c they have a long history together :)
i)he had a bit of champagne eventually.
Peer (or not!) pressure! *shakes head*
j) You should be proud! There were so many things I wanted to point out, but these were my favorites :)
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