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[sumthinlikhuman]

Author: Arachnae

Comments

[miiko_ashida]

Ooh, purdy! ^_^ Endings were always your strong suit. I really liked the first three lines and the last two. You've done good work here(though your mastery of Okita has yet to be completed; I think you're better with Hijikata).

Much love, and keep it up!

[sumthinlikhuman]

Okita is hard, what can I say. I need to do a bit more research (read: watch more of the series) and, I don't know, take notes or something.

*cookies for being a first review* Thanks for the review. *goes to work on the next few*